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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.12

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 12
Recycling is a process of converting waste materials into new materials and objects which are suitable for reuse. In my opinion, governments should pass legislation in order to ensure proper recycling of waste materials at domestic level. (37) In ancient times, people had no concept of recycling process. In many parts of the world, all the garbage and waste materials had thrown outside homes or poured into streams or rivers. Such actions of people had not only polluted our environment in the past, but also put humans and animals in great trouble. In the present world, people are using different methods to recycle waste products in homes. For example, food boxes are used in houses after cleaning. Similarly, empty bottles of drinks are frequently used for drinking and storing water. In developing countries, due to absence of recycling laws or lack of public awareness, people are rarely recycled their domestic waste products. (116) In developed countries, governments have taken impressive initiatives and have enforced strict check and balance over the recycling of waste objects. The governments have also facilitated their residents by providing certain facilities to recycle their waste materials at free of cost. Thus, if the efforts of governments and the cooperation of people remained continue on improving the standards of recycling waste products at home, the world will certainly become environment friendly in the near future. (75) In my opinion, governments must not only have to take new legal measures, but also have to ensure fair implementation of existing laws to make sure that all the waste materials in homes have gone under recycling process. (38)
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Recycling
is a process of converting
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waste
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materials
into new
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materials
and objects which are suitable for reuse. In my opinion,
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governments
should pass legislation in order to ensure proper
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recycling
of
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waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
materials
at domestic level. (37)

In ancient times,
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people
had no concept of
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recycling
process. In
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many
parts of the world, all the garbage and
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waste
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materials
had thrown outside
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homes
or poured into streams or rivers. Such actions of
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people
had not
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only
polluted our environment in the past,
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but
also
put humans and animals in great trouble. In the present world,
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people
are using
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different
methods to recycle
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waste
products in
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homes
.
For example
, food boxes are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in
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houses
after cleaning.
Similarly
, empty bottles of drinks are
frequently
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used
for drinking and storing water. In
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developing countries
, due to absence of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
laws or lack of public awareness,
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people
are rarely recycled their domestic
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waste
products. (116)

In
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developed countries
,
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governments
have taken impressive initiatives and have enforced strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
and balance over the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
objects. The
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governments
have
also
facilitated their residents by providing certain facilities to recycle their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
materials
at free of cost.
Thus
, if the efforts of
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governments
and the cooperation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
remained continue on improving the standards of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
products at home, the world will
certainly
become environment friendly in the near future. (75)

In my opinion,
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governments
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must
not
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only
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have to
take new legal measures,
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but
also
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have to
ensure
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
implementation of existing laws to
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make
sure that all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
materials
in
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homes
have gone under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
process. (38)
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 12

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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