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: Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which ki v.4

: Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which ki v. 4
Friendship is very important for all of us. If you have true friends you aren’t afraid of life challenges. Someone choose friends, which are close in spirit and have similar views on life. Others like to spend time with opposites. Let’s compare pros and cons of each type of friends. In my opinion, we always search someone, who is able to understand us. Who can support us in hard time and share with us the moment of happiness. It is much easier to find common language with a person, which is similar to yourself. It is great, because you can spend time together, doing things which you are interested in. But at the same time such friends have the same flaws as you have, like bad habits or hard temperament. That’s why it is necessary to have someone, who can show you another way of life. I think it is very good to have friends, which have others points of view. You can often arguing about something, but truth is born in the dispute. Opposites attract and in the result from this attraction will be powerful explosion or great symbiosis it depends on your personality. It is much harder to be friends, when you are different, but in most cases such friendship is stronger. To cut the long story short, it is useful to have different types of friends. Ones which are similar to you are necessary to your soul, and opposites help your personality to develop and reach new heights.
Friendship is
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for all of us.
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If
you have true
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friends
you aren’t afraid of life challenges. Someone
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choose
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friends
, which are close in spirit and have similar views on life. Others like to spend
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time
with opposites.
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Let
’s compare pros and cons of each type of friends.

In my opinion, we always search someone, who is able to understand us. Who can support us in
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hard
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time
and share with us the moment of happiness. It is much easier to find common language with a person, which is similar to yourself. It is great,
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because
you can spend
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time
together, doing things which you
are interested
in.
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But
at the same
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time
such
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friends
have the same flaws as you have, like
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bad
habits or
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hard
temperament. That’s why it is necessary to have someone, who can
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show
you another way of life.

I
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think
it is
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very
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good
to have
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friends
, which have others points of view. You can
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often
arguing about something,
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but
truth
is born
in the dispute. Opposites attract and in the result from this attraction will be powerful explosion or great symbiosis it depends on your personality. It is much harder to be
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friends
, when you are
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different
,
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but
in most cases
such friendship is stronger.

To
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cut
the long story short, it is useful to have
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different
types of
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friends
. Ones which are similar to you are necessary to your soul, and opposites
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help
your personality to develop and reach new heights.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
To have another language is to possess a second soul.
Charlemagne

IELTS essay : Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which ki v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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