It is believed that the role of women in the family and in the community has changed significantly in the past two decades. Although some people have called it a positive development, others think that it has caused some serious problems for children, since they have less attention from their mothers who are mostly working. To a certain extent, I would agree with the statement, but I think it will depend on the individuals themselves on how they manage their time.
On the one hand, it is true that as a career woman, women have less time for their children. They have to leave home early in the morning, while their children are still sleeping in their bed and arrive back at night when the children will have been asleep. As a result, they have little time for their family and children are left at home alone. They become depressed or stress due to the lack of attention from their mothers and lead them in doing some negative things to attract their mother's attention, such as using drugs or involve in criminal activities.
On the other hand, some working women have successfully balanced between their professional and personal time. They have learned to work in the most efficient and effective ways and managed their priority well. Therefore, they would not have to spend such a long hours at work and could give more time for their children. Consequently, the children would not be feeling abandoned or neglected, while the mothers could continue with their work.
In conclusion, it is a fact that many women have become working women these days, and some people think that the trend has caused some problems for the children. To a certain level, I would agree that the rising number of working women could cause some problems for the family, as I think it depends on the person themselves. If they could manage their schedule and priority well, I think they could be successful working women and housewives as well.
It
is believed
that the role of
women
in the family and in the community has
changed
significantly
in the past two decades. Although
some
people
have called it a
positive
development, others
think
that it has caused
some
serious problems for
children
, since they have less attention from their mothers who are
mostly
working
. To a certain extent, I would
agree
with the statement,
but
I
think
it will depend on the individuals themselves on how they manage their time.
On the one hand, it is true that as a career woman,
women
have less
time
for their
children
. They
have to
leave
home early in the morning, while their
children
are
still
sleeping in their bed and arrive back at night when the
children
will have been asleep.
As a result
, they have
little
time
for their family and
children
are
left
at home alone. They become depressed or
stress
due to the lack of attention from their mothers and lead them in doing
some
negative
things to attract their mother's attention, such as using drugs or involve in criminal activities.
On the other hand
,
some
working
women
have
successfully
balanced between their professional and personal
time
. They have learned to work in the most efficient and effective ways and managed their priority well.
Therefore
, they would not
have to
spend such a long
hours
at work and could give more
time
for their
children
.
Consequently
, the
children
would not be feeling abandoned or neglected, while the mothers could continue with their work.
In conclusion
, it is a fact that
many
women
have become
working
women
these days, and
some
people
think
that the trend has caused
some
problems for the
children
. To a certain level, I would
agree
that the rising number of
working
women
could cause
some
problems for the family, as I
think
it depends on the person themselves. If they could manage their schedule and priority well, I
think
they could be successful
working
women
and housewives
as well
.