Certain individuals have this notion that the sole purpose of jail is to punish criminals, whereas, others believe that they are use as a rehab. This essay agrees that the main purpose of putting criminals behind bars is to make them guilty conscious, so that they realise their mistakes and take steps to correct them in future. This essay will discuss both point of views.
Several people have this opinion that criminals convicting henious crime such as murder, rape and kidnapping should be put in jail in order to punsh them so that they do not repeat it again. Dangerous criminals should be given harsh punshments by the prison authorities as they are so thick skinned and lack any emotions and feelings that by making them do social activities will not change their mind set moreover, punishment is important so that when they are released in the society they do not provide any harm to people.
However, many disagree and feel that criminals should be motivated to do social activities such as planting trees, helping the elderly people, making toys for orphans as this will aids in developing a feeling of love and harmony among them. Individuals believe that people who are deprives of love and respect are more prone to follow the path of crime. Once they will get back love and appreciation, furthermore will be accepted by the society, they will become a good and responsible citizens.
To conclude, Although criminals should be punished for their monstrous criminal activities, some still feel that the best way to make them realise their mistake and to convert them to a good citizens in to rehabilitate them. Nevertheless, in my opinion, i vehmently agree that prisons should be used for rehabilitaion purpose in order to change the mind set of criminals and to motivate them to not to do any criminal activitiy in future.
Certain individuals have this notion that the sole purpose of jail is to punish
criminals
, whereas, others believe that they are
use
as a rehab. This essay
agrees
that the main purpose of putting
criminals
behind bars is to
make
them guilty conscious,
so
that they
realise
their mistakes and take steps to correct them
in future
. This essay will discuss both point of views.
Several
people
have this opinion that
criminals
convicting
henious
crime such as murder, rape and kidnapping should
be put
in jail in order to
punsh
them
so
that they do not repeat it again.
Dangerous
criminals
should be
given
harsh
punshments
by the prison authorities as they are
so
thick skinned
and lack any emotions and feelings that by making them do social activities will not
change
their mind set
moreover
, punishment is
important
so
that when they
are released
in the society they do not provide any harm to
people
.
However
,
many
disagree and feel that
criminals
should
be motivated
to do social activities such as planting trees, helping the elderly
people
, making toys for orphans as this will aids in developing a feeling of
love
and harmony among them. Individuals believe that
people
who are deprives of
love
and respect are more prone to follow the path of crime. Once they will
get
back
love
and appreciation,
furthermore
will be
accepted
by the society, they will become a
good
and responsible citizens.
To conclude
, Although
criminals
should
be punished
for their monstrous
criminal
activities,
some
still
feel that the best way to
make
them
realise
their mistake and to convert them to a
good
citizens in to rehabilitate them.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion, i
vehmently
agree
that prisons should be
used
for
rehabilitaion
purpose in order to
change
the mind set of
criminals
and to motivate them
to not to
do any
criminal
activitiy
in future
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes