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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.10

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). v. 10
These days, peoples are doing free of services while school programs are conducted to confirm working for a charity. What is the most effective method for dealing without taking money for the organization of events? In this essay, I will agree to support my opinions with examples. First of all, a group of members is sharing the information to help in society. Two advantages of communication and confidence in how to move other behaviours to understand anywhere. For example, old age houses are many in my country that need help with a free cost. A big business company donates a tremendous cheque or cash to use for a charity. Besides, the Service is mainly provided in daily life because there is keeping of different program in secondary school. Secondly, community services are required for paid work to get compulsory with paying of different customers. Outside of cultural to pay some of the highly payable in various countries. For instance, improving the neighbourhood to younger children depends upon the situation of life. Youth want more money for enjoying life events, so they're available to go to the cinema-like entertainment. Increasing relatives teaching sports to the adolescent of a compulsory part of the education. Many students at the age of 18 years to work in juvenile that is very helpless in some areas. In a nutshell, although it is a common belief that secondary school programs are not paying services. I believe that self-respect and confidence for a charity. I think that youth children are up surging with neighbours
These days, peoples are doing free of
services
while school programs
are conducted
to confirm working for a charity. What is the most effective method for dealing without taking money for the organization of
events
? In this essay, I will
agree
to support my opinions with examples.

First of all
, a group of members is sharing the information to
help
in society. Two advantages of communication and confidence in how to
move
other
behaviours
to understand anywhere.
For example
,
old
age
houses
are
many
in my country that need
help
with a free cost. A
big
business
company
donates a tremendous
cheque
or cash to
use
for a charity.
Besides
, the
Service
is
mainly
provided in daily life
because
there is keeping of
different
program in secondary school.

Secondly
, community
services
are required
for paid work to
get
compulsory with paying of
different
customers.
Outside of
cultural to pay
some of the
highly
payable in various countries.
For instance
, improving the
neighbourhood
to younger children depends upon the situation of life. Youth want more money for enjoying life
events
,
so
they're available to go to the cinema-like entertainment. Increasing relatives teaching sports to the adolescent of a compulsory part of the education.
Many
students at the age of 18 years to work in juvenile
that is
very
helpless in
some
areas.

In a nutshell, although it is a common belief that secondary school programs are not paying
services
. I believe that self-respect and confidence for a charity. I
think
that youth children are up surging with
neighbours
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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