Few individuals are of the argument about teaching voluntary service to students as a mandatory part of their secondary school syllabus. This essay agrees with that suggestion. Firstly, this essay will discuss how voluntary work for non governmental organisations will develop soft skills and secondly, discuss how extra curricular activities keeps them highly motivated and physically active.
Free service to the society in any form proves to be of great learning to young minds. Kid's brain shouldn't be filled with bookish knowledge, as that's not the only thing required to face competition. They should also learn other life skills such as effective communication with all age groups. For instance, visiting an old age home and spending time with elderly people will teach them behavioural skills with senior people. Also, a trip to an agriculture farm for learning where food comes from will make them value the basic needs in life.
In addition, other activities like sports can keep them enthusiastic and fit at the same time. Children mostly spend hours on studies in the classroom and tuitions which makes them very reserved in nature. However, schools who mandate a higher number of participation in sports, will motivate students to go to school. For example, a recent study, review shows, 100% attendance of students at schools where involvement is sports is compulsory.
In conclusion, voluntary work should be a mandatory for creative brain development, which happens from childhood, also extra-curricular activities makes students proactive.
Few individuals are of the argument about teaching voluntary service to
students
as a mandatory part of their secondary
school
syllabus. This essay
agrees
with that suggestion.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss how voluntary work for
non governmental
organisations
will develop soft
skills
and
secondly
, discuss how
extra curricular
activities
keeps
them
highly
motivated and
physically
active.
Free service to the society in any form proves to be of great learning to young minds. Kid's brain shouldn't
be filled
with bookish knowledge, as that's not the
only
thing required to face competition. They should
also
learn other life
skills
such as effective communication with all age groups.
For instance
, visiting an
old
age home and spending time with elderly
people
will teach them
behavioural
skills
with senior
people
.
Also
, a trip to an agriculture farm for learning where food
comes
from will
make
them value the basic needs in life.
In addition
, other activities like sports can
keep
them enthusiastic and fit at the same time. Children
mostly
spend hours on studies in the classroom and
tuitions
which
makes
them
very
reserved in nature.
However
,
schools
who mandate a higher number of participation in sports, will motivate
students
to go to
school
.
For example
, a recent study, review
shows
, 100% attendance of
students
at
schools
where involvement is sports is compulsory.
In conclusion
, voluntary work should be a mandatory for creative brain development, which happens from childhood,
also
extra-curricular activities
makes
students
proactive.
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