In the past, people thought that health was the only responsibility of the individual, however nowadays some assert that the government should take important steps to improve people's health. In my opinion, everyone has to take own responsibility for their health by keeping good habits.
Many health problems can be solved easily if people take individual responsibility. Firstly, people should not throw garbage anywhere as it can help to maintain a clean city and so as good health this can be done by penalties for those who do not follow rules. Secondly, people should eat healthy food, do regular exercise and take sleep at least 7-8 hours daily as it can give them the strength to overcome and fight for any disease. Currently, In the news, we all can see that Coronavirus is affecting those who have a low immunity system.
On the other hand, The government can also play a vital role in maintaining good health in society. The municipality can ensure that clean water is supplied, all over the city as well as water tanks are being cleaned regularly. Moreover, the Government can build better hospitals and can hire specialist doctors so that ill people can easily consult doctors and can recover soon. But if people are healthy, then they don't feel sick often and hence no need to visit doctors.
Although, the Government is responsible in some ways like clean water supply and constructing good hospitals. But I agree that individuals can make efforts to stay healthy and fit by keeping good eating habits and daily exercise.
In the past,
people
thought
that
health
was the
only
responsibility of the individual,
however
nowadays
some
assert that the
government
should take
important
steps to
improve
people
's
health
. In my opinion, everyone
has to
take
own
responsibility for their
health
by keeping
good
habits.
Many
health
problems can
be solved
easily
if
people
take individual responsibility.
Firstly
,
people
should not throw garbage anywhere as it can
help
to maintain a clean city and
so
as
good
health
this can
be done
by penalties for those who do not follow
rules
.
Secondly
,
people
should eat healthy food, do regular exercise and take sleep at least 7-8 hours daily as it can give them the strength to overcome and fight for any disease.
Currently
, In the news, we all can
see
that Coronavirus is affecting those who have a low immunity system.
On the other hand
, The
government
can
also
play a vital role in maintaining
good
health
in society. The municipality can ensure that clean water
is supplied
, all over the city
as well
as water tanks are
being cleaned
regularly
.
Moreover
, the
Government
can build better hospitals and can hire specialist doctors
so
that ill
people
can
easily
consult doctors and can recover
soon
.
But
if
people
are healthy, then they don't feel sick
often
and
hence
no need to visit doctors.
Although, the
Government
is responsible in
some
ways like clean water supply and constructing
good
hospitals.
But
I
agree
that individuals can
make
efforts to stay healthy and fit by keeping
good
eating habits and daily exercise.
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