In recent years, there has been a rise in the number of crimes being committed. Many people are of the opinion that these wrong-doings should be classified categorically. However, I believe that each offence should be looked upon in a subjective manner, taking into account the nature and severity of these unlawful activities.
Giving a fixed punishment would definitely make court proceedings a lot quicker. This is because the judges would not need to decide what type of punishment criminals would deserve as it would have been already decided for them. However, this is an unfair practice as some of the criminals may not deserve the punishments given to them. For example, a person robbing a convenient store will not deserve the same punishment as a person robbing a bank because the degree of the crime is not as severe as the latter.
On the other hand, deciding a crime according to the situation and motive of it make perfect sense as it would ensure that the lawbreaker is given a fair trial and the right punishment is handed down to him. For instance, a mentally ill person who commits a murder would be judged accordingly, instead of being grouped into the same category of all the other type of murderers. This, therefore, will make the trial balance and fair.
In conclusion, my opinion is that the punishment for a crime should be made up based on all the factors leading up to the unlawful action rather than providing judgement based on the classification of crimes into types.
In recent years, there has been a rise in the number of
crimes
being committed
.
Many
people
are of the opinion that these
wrong
-doings should
be classified
categorically
.
However
, I believe that each
offence
should
be looked
upon
in a subjective manner
, taking into account the nature and severity of these unlawful activities.
Giving a
fixed
punishment
would definitely
make
court proceedings a lot quicker. This is
because
the judges would not need to decide what type of
punishment
criminals would deserve as it would have been already decided for them.
However
, this is an unfair practice as
some of the
criminals may not deserve the
punishments
given
to them.
For example
, a person robbing a convenient store will not deserve the same
punishment
as a person robbing a bank
because
the degree of the
crime
is not as severe as the latter.
On the other hand
, deciding a
crime
according to the situation and motive of it
make
perfect sense as it would ensure that the lawbreaker is
given
a
fair
trial and the right
punishment
is handed
down to him.
For instance
, a mentally ill person who commits a murder would
be judged
accordingly
,
instead
of
being grouped
into the same category of all the other type of murderers. This,
therefore
, will
make
the trial balance and
fair
.
In conclusion
, my opinion is that the
punishment
for a
crime
should
be made
up based on all the factors leading up to the unlawful action
rather
than providing judgement based on the classification of
crimes
into types.
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