Some people believe that the women should play an equal role as men in country’s police and military fierce, such as army, while others, think women are not suitable for these king of work. Discuss and give your opinion. v.1
Some people believe that the women should play an equal role as men in country’s police and military fierce, such as army, while others, think women are not suitable for these king of work. Discuss and give your opinion. v. 1
Nowadays, more women are joining in nation’s military and police forces and have contribute significantly at both war sites as well as civil regions. However, some people believe women can’t work in these forces due to physical hardships. In the following passage, I will explain the important needs for women to be employed before declaring my stance.
At present, increasing number of women showing interest to work in country’s military force is an eccentric change happening in our country. As they undergo various trainings to empower them to work in any situations gives you both mental and physical stability to embrace the challenges. For instance, in US military force many women have played vital role during Iraq war. This shows that they are capable enough to work in war sites. In addition, for both army civil and administration departments are employed with women employees. Therefore, even though there is enormous physical strain in the war sites, with the advance training programmes will aid them to work any locations.
Furthermore, women play a significant role in police forces as they need to handle women offenders. For example, a recent robbery case in Chennai, 2 women were suspected, and taken to custody, in such instance women police are effective used to interrogate them to prevent from any sensitive issue if they were handled by men police team. Moreover, it is believed that they have better view in analysing criminal cases. Thus, it is assumed women are greatly required to handle woman criminals and to investigate the case with different approach.
To conclude, few decades ago, people were hesitant of women joining nation’s military forces, but the situation has changed, where they are trained to work any situations and they can contribute effectively too.
Nowadays, more
women
are joining in nation’s military and
police
forces
and have
contribute
significantly
at both
war
sites
as well as
civil regions.
However
,
some
people
believe
women
can’t
work
in these
forces
due to physical hardships. In the following passage, I will
explain
the
important
needs for
women
to
be employed
before
declaring my stance.
At present, increasing number of
women
showing interest to
work
in country’s military
force
is an eccentric
change
happening in our country. As they undergo various trainings to empower them to
work
in any situations gives you both mental and physical stability to embrace the challenges.
For instance
, in US military
force
many
women
have played vital role during Iraq
war
. This
shows
that they are capable
enough
to
work
in
war
sites.
In addition
, for both army civil and administration departments
are employed
with
women
employees.
Therefore
,
even though
there is enormous physical strain in the
war
sites, with the advance training
programmes
will aid them to
work
any locations.
Furthermore
,
women
play a significant role in
police
forces
as they need to handle
women
offenders.
For example
, a recent robbery case in Chennai, 2
women
were suspected
, and taken to custody, in such instance
women
police
are effective
used
to interrogate them to
prevent
from any sensitive issue if they
were handled
by
men
police
team.
Moreover
, it
is believed
that they have better view in
analysing
criminal cases.
Thus
, it
is assumed
women
are
greatly
required to handle woman criminals and to investigate the case with
different
approach.
To conclude
, few decades ago,
people
were hesitant of
women
joining nation’s military
forces
,
but
the situation has
changed
, where they
are trained
to
work
any
situations and
they can contribute
effectively
too.
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32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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