Some people believe that the use of mobile phones in public is as annoying as smoking and should be banned, similarly. v.1
Some people believe that the use of mobile phones in public is as annoying as smoking and should be banned, similarly. v. 1
It is often considered by many that the usages of mobile phones in public places should be restricted as smoking has been. I completely agree with the banning of mobile phones in public places, especially where people are working and might get annoyed and interrupted.
Using mobile phones in public places causes several drawbacks, Firstly, it leads to various social problems. In other words, the use of mobile phones in public places causes serious offence. For example, recent researches showed that use of mobile phones while pedestrian crossing is the major cause of accidents in both developing and developed nations. Secondly, the lack of social interaction among individuals could be the consequence of mobile phones over usage in the public places. For instance, people travelling on the same bus become isolated and busy by surfing the internet on the mobile phones which lead to the lackings of communication among travellers.
In addition, there would be a scarcity of enjoyment in sightseeing while travelling. Take an example, if a person travelling by train through the countryside, the use of mobile phone makes them forget enjoy the fascinating places outside the compartment. Finally, talking loudly through mobile phones in public places such as church, mosque result in irritation, distress and disturbance to other individuals as mobile phones could be intrusive.
In conclusion mobile phone usage in public areas should be restricted to the welfare of the society and the citizens because the use of mobile phones in public is annoying as smoking.
It is
often
considered by
many
that the usages of mobile
phones
in
public
places
should
be restricted
as smoking has been. I completely
agree
with the banning of mobile
phones
in
public
places
,
especially
where
people
are working and might
get
annoyed and interrupted.
Using mobile
phones
in
public
places
causes several drawbacks,
Firstly
, it leads to various social problems.
In other words
, the
use
of mobile
phones
in
public
places
causes serious
offence
.
For example
, recent researches
showed
that
use
of mobile
phones
while pedestrian crossing is the major cause of accidents in both developing and developed nations.
Secondly
, the lack of social interaction among individuals could be the consequence of mobile
phones
over usage in the
public
places
.
For instance
,
people
travelling on the same bus become isolated and busy by surfing the internet on the mobile
phones
which lead to the
lackings
of communication among
travellers
.
In addition
, there would be a scarcity of enjoyment in sightseeing while travelling. Take an example, if a person travelling by train through the countryside, the
use
of mobile
phone
makes
them forget enjoy the fascinating
places
outside the compartment.
Finally
, talking
loudly
through mobile
phones
in
public
places
such as church, mosque result in irritation, distress and disturbance to other individuals as mobile
phones
could be intrusive.
In conclusion
mobile
phone
usage in
public
areas should
be restricted
to the welfare of the society and the citizens
because
the
use
of mobile
phones
in
public
is annoying as smoking.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes