These days, some people believe that with development of economical air travel, a growing number of international travel are now expanding in many countries in the world. However, others hold the view that there are some drawbacks. In this essay, I will examine both ideas in detail and then give my opinion.
On the one hand, there is a common belief that the arrival of aerail transportation can be considerably benefical. Obviously, with low-cost flights, people have more opportunities to travel abroad easily. For example, they are likely to afford pay a visit to other countries on holiday or students find more comfortable to come back their home if they attend at a school abroad instead of being afraid of cost travel. Besides, from economic perspective, international air travel has sucessfully shortened the long distance places. In other words, more and more businessman tend to attend meetings aboard and also expand international partnership which contribute to growth economy.
However, some argue that international air travel often causes some negative impacts. One of the biggest problem of the development of aviation industry is that aeroplanes use a huge of fuel, a non-renewable resource which make carbon dioxide and a main factor to climate change and global warming.
In conclusion, although a growing number of people feel that they are suffered negative effects from air travel advances, I believe there are more beneficial to foster economic integration and process of globalization of each country.
These days,
some
people
believe that with development of economical
air
travel
, a growing number of
international
travel
are
now
expanding in
many
countries in the world.
However
, others hold the view that there are
some
drawbacks. In this essay, I will examine both
ideas
in detail and then give my opinion.
On the one hand, there is a common belief that the arrival of
aerail
transportation can be
considerably
benefical
.
Obviously
, with low-cost flights,
people
have more opportunities to
travel
abroad
easily
.
For example
, they are likely to afford pay a visit to other countries on holiday or students find more comfortable to
come
back their home if they attend at a school abroad
instead
of being afraid of cost
travel
.
Besides
, from economic perspective,
international
air
travel
has
sucessfully
shortened the long distance places.
In other words
, more and more businessman tend to attend meetings aboard and
also
expand
international
partnership which contribute to growth economy.
However
,
some
argue that
international
air
travel
often
causes
some
negative
impacts. One of the biggest problem of the development of aviation industry is that
aeroplanes
use
a huge of
fuel, a non-renewable resource which
make
carbon dioxide and a main factor to climate
change
and global warming.
In conclusion
, although a growing number of
people
feel that they
are suffered
negative
effects from
air
travel
advances, I believe there are more beneficial to foster economic integration and process of globalization of each country.
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