Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v. 123 v.11
Some people believe that technology has made man more social. with this opinion? v. 123 v. 11
It is argued by some that people are increasing their sociability because of technology's globalization. I agree with this because using the internet and portable devices, everybody can be connected all the time with others. Despite this, humans are losing the capacity to be in contact face to face and just they just share their life in a virtual way.
First of all, advances in social media allow that people can meet each other and get a conversation with new friends around the world. Also, they can be connected with old friends and family all the time in a couple of minutes, not being the distance between them a problem at all. For instance, there are many groups in the internet where fans of something; such a movie, music band and so on, can share information and experiences with others in their similar situation.
On the other hand, it is important to get together with friends face to face and experience moments in real places, no just virtual ones. For example, some people organize a meeting with friends, but they are using their mobile phones and watching the screen during the event, instead of being with them and having a conversation. In these cases, technology turns as a kind of addiction, and people can live without it.
To sum up, nowadays technology has a huge importance in the modern society, and that is understandable due to it is an amazing tool for meeting people from other countries and being connected all the time. Thus, in some instances for some is difficult to stop watching their devices, being that a kind of addiction. For that reason, it is crucial to have a balance between virtual and real life.
It
is argued
by
some
that
people
are increasing their sociability
because
of technology's globalization. I
agree
with this
because
using the internet and portable devices, everybody can
be connected
all the time with others. Despite this, humans are losing the capacity to be in contact
face
to
face
and
just
they
just
share their life
in a virtual way
.
First of all
, advances in social media
allow
that
people
can
meet
each
other
and
get
a conversation with new
friends
around the world.
Also
, they can
be connected
with
old
friends
and family all the time in a couple of minutes, not being the distance between them a problem at all.
For instance
, there are
many
groups
in the internet
where fans of something; such a movie, music band and
so
on, can share information and experiences with others in their similar situation.
On the
other
hand, it is
important
to
get
together with
friends
face
to
face
and experience moments in real places,
no
just
virtual ones.
For example
,
some
people
organize a meeting with
friends
,
but
they are using their mobile phones and watching the screen during the
event
,
instead
of being with them and having a conversation. In these cases, technology turns as a kind of addiction, and
people
can
live
without it.
To sum up, nowadays technology has a huge importance in the modern society, and
that is
understandable due to it is an amazing tool for meeting
people
from
other
countries and
being connected
all the time.
Thus
, in
some
instances for
some
is difficult to
stop
watching their devices, being that a kind of addiction. For that reason, it is crucial to have a balance between virtual and real life.
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