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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career,while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. v. 26
The number of people reckon that the best way to achieve success is studying at university or college directly after school. However, another part of people consider that there is no need to continue study at university, having a job can much more than educational fields. Both sides have pros and cons, but from my point of view it is better to carry on studying and then get a high-paid job. Teenegares who prefers education than working, and have some patience they will always chose university. If your goal is to become teacher, engineer, doctor and etc, there is not another way to come your dreams true. When you graduate, you will have some specific degree and diploma to accept your knowledge at college or university. For many people it is more important to earn vast sums and for instance buy their favourite car, home or gadgets. In case of this, their salary is pretty low than in up mentioned’s case. The particular reason for the circumstance is that they do not have enough knowledge to be teachers for example. They have to do some physical jobs. To my mind the best but very complicated is that when you have both. If you are eager to get knowledge as well as have work and have your own money, you always find ways to do both. To sum ep everything that has been stated, I can not choose one between higher education VS work. From my experience, both of them are possible at the same time. The only thing that you should have is desire.
The number of
people
reckon
that the best way to achieve success is studying at university or college
directly
after school.
However
, another part of
people
consider that there is no need to continue study at university, having a job can much more than educational fields. Both sides have pros and cons,
but
from my point of view it is better to carry on studying and then
get
a high-paid job.

Teenegares
who prefers education than working, and have
some
patience they will always
chose
university. If your goal is to become teacher, engineer, doctor
and etc
, there is not another way to
come
your dreams true. When you graduate, you will have
some
specific degree and diploma to accept your knowledge at college or university.

For
many
people
it is more
important
to earn vast sums and
for instance
buy
their
favourite
car, home or gadgets. In case of this, their salary is pretty
low
than in up mentioned’s case. The particular reason for the circumstance is that they do not have
enough
knowledge to be teachers
for example
. They
have to
do
some
physical jobs.

To my mind the best
but
very
complicated is that when you have both. If you are eager to
get
knowledge
as well
as have work and have your
own
money, you always find ways to do both.

To sum
ep
everything that has
been stated
, I can not choose one between higher education VS work. From my experience, both of them are possible at the same time. The
only
thing that you should have is desire.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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5 paragraphs
264 words
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