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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. v. 1
It is important to consider whether to give homework to pupils or not by their educators. This essay discusses both sides of the argument and then give my own perspective on this matter. On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that homework should not be given to school children by their teachers. The main reason for believing this is that children could use their time-after- school in leisure activities. Since such spare-time activities are vital in youngsters' developments, both physical and mental, it is essential to provide them with the opportunities to engage in sports or other fruitful activities to freshen up their minds and bodies. For example, according to a survey conducted by NewYork's School Association, pupils who are not given homework, tend to utilize their time by engaging in sports activities, and usually appear to be more active than other schools' students. On the other hand, it is often argued that homework has an effective contribution in youngsters' education. This is because small assignments or tasks to be done after school, often keep students engaged and occupied, thus helping them in developing their cognitive skills which is useful for them in their educational life. For instance, students who spend their time at home in completing homework are usually more productive and achieve remarkable grades in their exams. A second point is that such pupils tend to develop the habit of hard work in the form of studying at home also, other than school. This extra study time usually makes them strong and prepare them for the struggle later on in their professional life. In conclusion, I believe both sides have their merits. On balance, I tend to believe that homework, surely, is beneficial for a student's academic life as it provides him with the benefits of developing cognitive abilities as well as the tendency to face hardships in upcoming life.
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to pupils or not by their educators. This essay discusses both sides of the argument and then give my
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own
perspective on this matter. On one side of the argument, there are
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people
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homework
should not be
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given
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children by their teachers. The main reason for believing this is that children could
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use
their time-after-
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in leisure
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activities
. Since such spare-time
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activities
are vital in youngsters' developments, both physical and mental, it is essential to provide them with the opportunities to engage in sports or
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other
fruitful
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activities
to freshen up their minds and bodies.
For example
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NewYork
's
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Association, pupils who are not
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homework
, tend to utilize their time by engaging in sports
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activities
, and
usually
appear to be more active than
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other
schools' students. On the
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hand, it is
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argued that
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homework
has an effective contribution in youngsters' education. This is
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because
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small
assignments or tasks to
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after
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school
,
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often
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keep
students engaged and occupied,
thus
helping them in developing their cognitive
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skills
which is useful for them in their educational
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life
.
For instance
, students who spend their time at home in completing
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homework
are
usually
more productive and achieve remarkable grades in their exams. A second point is that such pupils tend to develop the habit of
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hard
work in the form of studying at home
also
,
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other
than
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school
. This extra study time
usually
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makes
them strong and prepare them for the struggle later on in their professional
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life
.
In conclusion
, I believe both sides have their merits. On balance, I tend to believe that
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homework
,
surely
, is beneficial for a student's academic
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life
as it provides him with the benefits of developing cognitive abilities
as well
as the tendency to face hardships in upcoming
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life
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. v. 1

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
316 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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