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mobile phones have made life easier anyone can use a mobile phone to answer or make work calls for home calls at any place seven days a week do you think this development has more positive effects on negative effects on the individual and society

Mobile phones have made life easier and anyone can use a mobile phone to answer or make work calls or home calls art any place 7 days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on the individual and the society v. 2
it is reckoned that mobile phones for everyone is gifted with flexible communication does I will be explaining its pros on the person and society in the upcoming coming paragraphs to begin with there are several reasons why cell phones made people's life easy the first and the foremost reason is it allows a user to connect with his family member while those who living far from their home with the help of cell phones they can do call on video call while in past it was impossible to talk with their loved ones because on that time communication sources were limited and indeed they cannot talked easy moreover the main merit of cell phone in societies that the mobile phones are easily portable initially cell phones are very convenient and also it's the best way to keep the record of personal documents and contact number for example with the help of mobile phone or help during the time of emergency people can call the police immediately with the help of cell phones to be conclude the cell phones plays a functional role in everyone's life people can take advantages of the cell phones in 7 days
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that mobile
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phones
for everyone
is gifted
with flexible communication
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with there are several reasons why
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cell
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phones
made
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people
's life easy the
first
and the foremost reason is it
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allows
a user to connect with his family member while those who living far from their home with the
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help
of
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cell
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phones
they can do call on video call while in past it was impossible to talk with their
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loved
ones
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because
on that time communication sources
were limited
and
indeed
they cannot
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easy
moreover
the main merit of
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cell
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phone
in societies that the mobile
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phones
are
easily
portable
initially
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cell
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phones
are
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very
convenient and
also
it's the best way to
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keep
the record of personal documents and contact number
for example
with the
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help
of mobile
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phone
or
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help
during the time of emergency
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people
can call the police immediately with the
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help
of
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cell
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phones
to be
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the
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cell
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phones
plays a functional role in everyone's life
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people
can take advantages of the
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cell
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phones
in 7 days
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IELTS essay mobile phones have made life easier anyone can use a mobile phone to answer or make work calls for home calls at any place seven days a week do you think this development has more positive effects on negative effects on the individual and society

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
196 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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