Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, other believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples. v.4
Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, other believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Give your own opinion and examples. v. 4
For the most part, money is playing a fundamental role in our life. some of us think that they will become more happy with better finance; while others believe they are still delighted without massive financial support. From my perspective, each of the opinions has its own perks, but i tend to gravitate on the first idea.
All of us are pursueing our career in order not to be worry about living conditions. we always consider money an indispensable way to get things. Earning money enables people to buy furniture, food, drinks, and many other tools. I am for instance studying at high school and working as a personal trainer at the same time. Although my parents can provide me with financial support, but i still work to live a better life. In addition, there are almost nothing which is given for free, and we need money to trade for it. You definitely can not get off the road without any money in your pocket. some people are enthusiastic about making profit, according to them, nothing is enough.
However, everything has its downsides, so does this opinion. As i has mentioned above, nothing is enough. Someone who is crazy about it can possibly do harm to others. Businessmen are willing to play dirty with their opponents so as to get rid of them. The more people want money, the more bad things they will do. this is not the solution to happiness.
In conclusion, money is a vital factor, but it is not everything. we need to have money, but there are also many other ways to achieve happiness.
For the most part
,
money
is playing a fundamental role in our life.
some
of us
think
that they will become more happy with better finance; while others believe they are
still
delighted without massive financial support. From my perspective, each of the opinions has its
own
perks,
but
i
tend to gravitate on the
first
idea
.
All of us are
pursueing
our career in order not to be worry about living conditions.
we
always consider
money
an indispensable way to
get
things. Earning
money
enables
people
to
buy
furniture, food, drinks, and
many
other
tools. I am
for instance
studying at high school and working as a personal trainer at the same time. Although my parents can provide me with financial support,
but
i
still
work to
live
a better life.
In addition
, there are almost nothing which is
given
for free, and we need
money
to trade for it. You definitely can not
get
off the road without any
money
in your pocket.
some
people
are enthusiastic about making profit, according to them, nothing is
enough
.
However
, everything has its downsides,
so
does this opinion. As
i
has mentioned above, nothing is
enough
. Someone who is crazy about it can
possibly
do harm to others. Businessmen are willing to play dirty with their opponents
so as to
get
rid of them. The more
people
want
money
, the more
bad
things they will do. this is not the solution to happiness.
In conclusion
,
money
is a vital factor,
but
it is not everything.
we
need to have
money
,
but
there are
also
many
other
ways to achieve happiness.
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