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Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.4

Undoubtedly, society is divided into two segments as per the district mindset of different people people believe that it is difficult to live in big cities while other believe that it is become easier this essay will examine both the views and give your opinion. Tu Kaun Speed the first motion there are married things to be shared in CDS paper first insidious people get high paid jobs and higher number of people can get jobs compared to outside of cities and villages second people can find anything near to the residential area in series however in villages they have to go far more distance to buy something to illustrate, in cities there are restaurants, fast food shops, coffee and tea shops, and shopping malls every hundred metre distance and in outskirts area aur villages have very few shops to add this in big cities education and health Healthcare systems are much better compared to villages for remote villages do not have good road connections for Transport while cities have good quality of roads. Moving towards others second argument of this debate the first point of this issue is that in CDS people's lives become fast people working all day even at home and they can not spend much time with their family and talk with them apart from the incidence of pollution is very high suggest sound pollution water pollution and air pollution so recent research said that people who live in cities they become unhealthy and get disease instantly. In my opinion Government and as well individual should come forward for reduce the climate change people should spend more time with his family. In conclusion according to my perspective disadvantages eclipse by advantages and cities life are more comfortable and easy.
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, society
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into two segments as per the district mindset of
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people
believe that it is difficult to
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live
in
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big
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cities
while other believe that it
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easier this essay will examine both the views and give your opinion.

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Kaun
Speed the
first
motion there
are married
things to
be shared
in CDS paper
first
insidious
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people
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get
high paid jobs and higher number of
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people
can
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get
jobs compared to outside of
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cities
and
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villages
second
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people
can find anything near to the residential area in series
however
in
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villages
they
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have to
go far more distance to
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buy
something to illustrate, in
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cities
there are restaurants,
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fast
food shops, coffee and tea shops, and shopping malls every
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hundred metre distance
and in outskirts area
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aur
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villages
have
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few shops to
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add
this in
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big
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cities
education and health Healthcare systems are much better compared to
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villages
for remote
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villages
do not have
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good
road connections for Transport while
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cities
have
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good
quality of roads.

Moving towards others second argument of this debate the
first
point of this issue is that in CDS
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people
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lives
become
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fast
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people
working all day even at
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home and
they can not spend much time with their family and talk with them apart from the incidence of
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pollution
is
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very
high
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suggest
sound
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pollution
water
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pollution
and air
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pollution
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so
recent research said that
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people
who
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live
in
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cities
they become unhealthy and
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get
disease
instantly
.

In my opinion
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Government
and
as well
individual should
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come
forward for
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reduce
the climate
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change
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people
should spend more time with his family.

In conclusion
according to my perspective disadvantages eclipse by advantages and
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cities
life are more comfortable and easy.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult others believe that it is getting easier discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
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5.5
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