Health play a significant role in everyone's life because it is a key to success and happiness. Nowadays a majority of masses think that it is the responsibility of a person to pay attention towards their health and stay fit by doing some action, while others argue that authorities should pay attention to their citizen diet. However, I reckon that people should have to eat a healthy diet and stay fit because it is their own responsibilities in this essay I will elaborate the both viewpoints on my further writing.
To embark on, the reason why the people have to pay attention to their own health. First and foremost cause of this is that they did not have to depend on their people for their health if they take a light diet then they can build more strength and stay fit. Also these types of folks think that it is a good habit to do exercise and eat healthy food because it also develop their personality level and built a confident level, for instance; a survey was conducted by japan's people in which we came to know that most people who are fit have more successful business and have a lot of confidence while others who have obesity these are suffering from certain problems.
On the other hand, some masses believe that it is the responsibility of authorities to make sure that their people eat healthy food because there are various factories which supply food with food fortification and cause more disease. If the government supply healthy food to their citizens, then they can stay fit and healthy.
In conclusion, even though it is a true fact that if authorities supply healthy food to their citizen, then they stay fit nevertheless people should stay healthy if they eat healthy food.
Health
play
a significant role in everyone's life
because
it is a key to success and happiness. Nowadays a majority of masses
think
that it is the responsibility of a person to pay attention towards their
health
and
stay
fit
by doing
some
action, while others argue that authorities should pay attention to their citizen diet.
However
, I reckon that
people
should
have to
eat
a
healthy
diet and
stay
fit
because
it is their
own
responsibilities in this essay I will elaborate the both viewpoints on my
further
writing.
To embark on, the reason why the
people
have to
pay attention to their
own
health
.
First
and foremost cause of this is that they did not
have to
depend on their
people
for their
health
if they take a light diet then they can build more strength and
stay
fit
.
Also
these types of folks
think
that it is a
good
habit to do exercise and
eat
healthy
food
because
it
also
develop
their personality level and built a confident level,
for instance
; a survey
was conducted
by japan's
people
in which we came to know that most
people
who are
fit
have more successful business and have
a lot of
confidence while others who have obesity these are suffering from certain problems.
On the other hand
,
some
masses believe that it is the responsibility of authorities to
make
sure that their
people
eat
healthy
food
because
there are various factories which supply
food
with
food
fortification and cause more disease. If the
government
supply
healthy
food
to their citizens, then they can
stay
fit
and healthy.
In conclusion
,
even though
it is a true fact that if authorities supply
healthy
food
to their citizen, then they
stay
fit
nevertheless
people
should
stay
healthy
if they
eat
healthy
food
.
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