Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way. Do you agree or disagree? v.8
Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way. v. 8
Having a hobby plays an important role in human life. A number of people think that people should choose a difficult hobby if they want to enjoy it. I completely disagree with this view and I believe that the type of the pastime is not important in order to have a sense of joy.
Firstly, hobbies which can be easily performed make people happy in some way because what is important is to have a joyful time. Some common pastimes such as listening music, reading a book, and watch films, which have not any difficulty, can effectively boost the mood of individuals. For example, listening music in a rainy day while walking in a forest can reduce the level of stress, and make listeners to enjoy the songs they like, and the nature. Therefore, people would enjoy any leisure time activity as a pastime.
Secondly, creative hobbies such as painting, drawing, carving, photography provide people with full of joyful times. For centuries, painting or drawing, which requires some equipment, has played an important role in human life. For instance, early humans painted on the stones in order to enjoy creating something, and expressing a feeling. In other words, early humans found a way to enjoy easy and creative activities and their creations did not have to be a masterpiece, or fascinating. However, what is important was to spend a quality time on a creative activity. Hence, hobbies are considered as important practices irrespective of the difficulty level of them.
In conclusion, every hobby contains a source of happiness and joy in some way. I strongly believe that individuals do not have to get a difficult hobby, as even a simple pastime can provide people with a sense of joy.
Having a
hobby
plays an
important
role in
human
life. A number of
people
think
that
people
should choose a difficult
hobby
if they want to
enjoy
it. I completely disagree with this view and I believe that the type of the pastime is not
important
in order to have a sense of joy.
Firstly
,
hobbies
which can be
easily
performed
make
people
happy in
some
way
because
what is
important
is to have a joyful
time
.
Some
common pastimes such as listening music, reading a book, and
watch
films, which have not any difficulty, can
effectively
boost the mood of individuals.
For example
, listening music in a rainy day while walking in a forest can
reduce
the level of
stress
, and
make
listeners to
enjoy
the songs they like, and the nature.
Therefore
,
people
would
enjoy
any leisure
time
activity as a pastime.
Secondly
, creative
hobbies
such as painting, drawing, carving, photography provide
people
with full of joyful
times
. For centuries, painting or drawing, which requires
some
equipment, has played an
important
role in
human
life.
For instance
, early
humans
painted on the stones in order to
enjoy
creating something, and expressing a feeling.
In other words
, early
humans
found a way to
enjoy
easy and creative activities and their creations did not
have to
be a masterpiece, or fascinating.
However
, what is
important
was to spend a quality
time
on a creative activity.
Hence
,
hobbies
are considered
as
important
practices irrespective of the difficulty level of them.
In conclusion
, every
hobby
contains a source of happiness and joy in
some
way. I
strongly
believe that individuals do not
have to
get
a difficult
hobby
, as even a simple pastime can provide
people
with a sense of joy.
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