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Some people say that every human being can create art, others Some people say that every human being can create art, others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people say that every human being can create art, others Some people say that every human being can create art, others think only the people born with the ability can create art. v. 1
Nature vs. Nurture debate has been raging for generations and no clear-cut has come up so far. Some vibe that human being art by inherited and others believe that aptitude being by hard task and training. This essay will intend to analyse both perspectives and provide evidence as to why hardworking and practice going to be a skill in craftsman. On the one hand, some think many artisan talents by genes such as 2-3-year-old participate reality show ‘Bangladesh Talent Hut’ and ‘Dance Bangla Dance’ and their performance miracle that why we are forced to believe that is truly gifted from nature. There are also many examples. For instance, who has not heard the achievement of like people Einstein? On the other hand, someone's trust workmanship, talent is made by themselves. More often than not, the verdict of someone of naturally has been talented too skewed. When we see a beautiful painting or such as art, then many people's judgment it’s naturally gifted. We tend to ignore the fact that the people may have travelled a long journey to reach that point. So, any talent behind their enthusiasm. In my opinion, to be recommendation top if you have talent then you will hard task continues. Many pioneers are loss, top to zero, only for lack of their industry. Talented people less afford, but going to apex continues job out. For example, Ronaldo, who is one of the most star players in football that he very hard industry than others teammate that's why he is a forerunner in his field. Conversely, anybody going to success his perseverance and hard endeavour in creative areas. In conclusion, this essay discussed with hard industry and natural gift. My opinion, most of the success comes out with hard performance and passion in the creative field and also others.
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vibe that human being art by inherited
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and others
believe that aptitude being by
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hard
task and training. This essay will intend to
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analyse
both perspectives and provide evidence as to why hardworking and practice going to be a
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skill
in craftsman.

On the one hand,
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some
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think
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many
artisan
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talents
by genes such as 2-3-year-
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old
participate reality
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show
‘Bangladesh
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Talent
Hut’ and ‘Dance
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Bangla
Dance’ and their performance miracle that why we
are forced
to believe
that is
truly
gifted from nature. There are
also
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many
examples.
For instance
, who has not heard the achievement of like
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people
Einstein?

On the
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hand, someone's trust workmanship,
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talent
is made
by themselves. More
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often
than not, the verdict of someone of
naturally
has
been talented
too skewed. When we
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see
a
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beautiful
painting or such as art, then
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many
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people
's judgment it’s
naturally
gifted. We tend to
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ignore
the fact that the
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people
may have travelled a long journey to reach that point.
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So
, any
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talent
behind their enthusiasm.

In my opinion, to be recommendation top if you have
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talent
then you will
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hard
task continues.
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Many
pioneers are loss, top to zero,
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for lack of their industry. Talented
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people
less afford,
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but
going to apex continues job out.
For example
, Ronaldo, who is one of the most star players in football that he
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very
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hard
industry than others teammate that's why he is a forerunner in his field.
Conversely
, anybody
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going
to success his perseverance and
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hard
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endeavour
in creative areas.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed with
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hard
industry and natural gift. My opinion, most of the success
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comes
out with
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hard
performance and passion in the creative field and
also
others.
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IELTS essay Some people say that every human being can create art, others Some people say that every human being can create art, others think only the people born with the ability can create art. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
302 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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