Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1
Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. v. 1
There is an opinion that people who work in entertainment receive too high salaries, and their impact on others is unfavorable; however, the opponents say that these individuals should be paid large amounts since they bring benefits to society. Even though show-business stars sometimes do not lead proper lifestyles, I believe that their talents make a huge difference for the lives of ordinary people.
On the one hand, enetrtainers obtain excessive remuneration, which they allegedly spent on their unhealthy lifestyles. Not only do some drink alcohol, but some also consume drugs, and this can set a negative example for their fans. For instance, a few months ago, while being drunk, Lady Gaga gave an interview, which was watched by many teenagers who look up to this singer. From my perspective, however, media outlets often filter inappropriate content with entertainers; therefore, celebrities still deserve to receive high pay despite their occasional misbehavior.
On the other hand, people who work in music, cinematography, and art ought to be paid large sums of money because they brighten up others’ mood. If a person has a dull job and feels exhausted after a hard-working day, they can watch they favorite TV program, or listen to a beautiful song, which would make them happier; thus, entertainers who produce such media content are very beneficial for society. When my family is tired and stressed, for example, we listen to James Corden’s comedy shows, which enhance our mood significantly. So, I completely agree that show-business stars ought to be paid high salaries.
In conclusion, although entertainers sometimes show a negative example to their followers by doing wrong things, I am of the opinion that they should be highly-paid since they carry out an important mission of helping ordinary people to have some fun.
There is an opinion that
people
who
work in entertainment receive too high salaries, and their impact on others is unfavorable;
however
, the opponents say that these individuals should
be paid
large amounts since they bring benefits to society.
Even though
show
-business stars
sometimes
do not lead proper lifestyles, I believe that their talents
make
a huge difference for the
lives
of ordinary
people
.
On the one hand,
enetrtainers
obtain excessive remuneration, which they allegedly spent on their unhealthy lifestyles. Not
only
do
some
drink alcohol,
but
some
also
consume drugs, and this can set a
negative
example for their fans.
For instance
, a few months ago, while
being drunk
, Lady Gaga gave an interview, which was
watched
by
many
teenagers
who
look up to this singer. From my perspective,
however
, media outlets
often
filter inappropriate content with entertainers;
therefore
, celebrities
still
deserve to receive high pay despite their occasional misbehavior.
On the other hand
,
people
who
work in music, cinematography, and art ought to
be paid
large sums of money
because
they brighten up others’ mood. If a person has a dull job and feels exhausted after a
hard
-working day, they can
watch
they favorite TV program, or listen to a
beautiful
song, which would
make
them happier;
thus
, entertainers
who
produce such media content are
very
beneficial for society. When my family
is tired
and
stressed
,
for example
, we listen to James
Corden
’s comedy
shows
, which enhance our mood
significantly
.
So
, I completely
agree
that
show
-business stars ought to
be paid
high salaries.
In conclusion
, although entertainers
sometimes
show
a
negative
example to their followers by doing
wrong
things, I am of the opinion that they should be
highly
-paid since they carry out an
important
mission of helping ordinary
people
to have
some
fun.
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