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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.6

Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. v. 6
It is said that despite the increase in online news popularity, most people will choose newspapers as the most important source of news. I strongly disagree because of accessibility and environmental issues. Online news is far easier to access than newspapers. Thanks to the internet, by owning a smart phone or a laptop and a clicking on a few links, one can have access to the news in a split second, or receive it through email daily, whereas they had to waste a lot of time walking or driving to one of the limited number of newsstand in the city every day in hot summers or freezing winters. So the internet provided us with news far easier and faster than before. Moreover, following news on the net is more environmentally friendly than reading newspapers. Annually, a great number of the trees is cut to produce paper for newspaper publication. The less the newspapers are read and subsequently published, the fewer number of trees is cut for such purposes. So more forests are protected which is an environmentally friendly measure. On the other hand, some believe that the newspapers are more reliable than online news. The news published in a newspaper is acknowledged by some professionals at newspaper office before publication, while there are a significant number of false messages and rumours on the internet which confuses people. So people can trust the accuracy of the news in newspapers compared to online news. However, it is suggested that individuals with reliability concerns can read the news from trusted sources like some channels and websites and ignore the news without citation. In conclusion, in spite of the long history of newspaper popularity, I believe that it will be replaced by online news for the majority of people as the most important source of news because of availability and environmental considerations.
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is said
that despite the increase in
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popularity, most
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people
will choose
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newspapers
as the most
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important
source of
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news
. I
strongly
disagree
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because
of accessibility and environmental issues.

Online
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news
is far easier to access than
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newspapers
. Thanks to the internet, by owning a smart phone or a laptop and a clicking on a few links, one can have access to the
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news
in a split second, or receive it through email daily, whereas they had to waste
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a lot of
time walking or driving to one of the limited
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number
of newsstand in the city every day in hot summers or freezing winters.
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So
the internet provided us with
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news
far easier and faster than
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before
.

Moreover
, following
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news
on the net is more
environmentally
friendly than reading
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newspapers
.
Annually
, a great
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number
of the trees is
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cut
to produce paper for
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newspaper
publication. The less the
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newspapers
are read
and
subsequently
published, the fewer
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number
of trees is
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cut
for such purposes.
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So
more forests
are protected
which is an
environmentally
friendly measure.

On the other hand
,
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some
believe that the
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newspapers
are more reliable than
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online
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news
. The
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news
published in a
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newspaper
is acknowledged
by
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some
professionals at
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newspaper
office
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before
publication, while there are a significant
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number
of false messages and
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rumours
on the internet which confuses
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people
.
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So
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people
can trust the accuracy of the
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news
in
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newspapers
compared to
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online
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news
.
However
, it
is suggested
that individuals with reliability concerns can read the
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news
from trusted sources like
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some
channels and websites and
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ignore
the
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news
without citation.

In conclusion
,
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in spite of
the long history of
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newspaper
popularity, I believe that it will
be replaced
by
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online
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news
for the majority of
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people
as the most
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important
source of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of availability and environmental considerations.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. v. 6

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
308 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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