These days crime is increasing at an alarming rate in the society. Majority of folks reckon that offenders should be kept for longer imprisonment which may lead to minimise the crime rate in the country. I partially agree with the given agrument and would like to discuss my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
There are abundant of reasons that why government should give long term punishment of prison to culprits. The chief favourable fact may be that, there are some criminals who commit hard core crimes such as murder and rape for those offenders this punishment is better. It would remind to other criminals to stop doing crimes. Therefore, it would help to makes a society good place to live there. For example, Indian government give a long term imprisonment to Dera chief of sirsa Ram Rahim in the case of rape. After taking this decision by legal bodies, the crime rate in the India is minimise at some extent.
Proceeding to the issue of why legal bodies should not give longer imprisonment to offenders. First of all, if criminals are kept in prison for long time period then prisons would become overcrowded. Consequently, government would spend more money to provide better facilities to offenders in the form of shelter, food, medical facility and clothes. Secondly, some criminals who commit minor crimes such as thieft, robbery and so on. If government keep to those ones in prison then it would be injustice for them. Instead of imprisonment, those criminals should send to rehabilitation center where they can learn new skills which may change the lifestyle and forget to do such crimes. Additional, some person only commit crimes when they confront unemployment due to lack of education so, legal authorities should provide better education and job to every citizen. As a result, it may reduce the crime rate in the nation.
To sum up, it can be confidently conveyed that, government should give longer imprisonment to only those offenders who do hard core crimes.
These
days
crime
is increasing at an alarming
rate
in the society. Majority of folks reckon that
offenders
should be
kept
for longer
imprisonment
which may lead to
minimise
the
crime
rate
in the country. I
partially
agree
with the
given
agrument
and would like to discuss my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
There are abundant of reasons that why
government
should
give
long term punishment of
prison
to culprits. The chief
favourable
fact may be that, there are
some
criminals
who commit
hard
core
crimes
such as murder and rape for those
offenders
this punishment is better. It would remind to other
criminals
to
stop
doing
crimes
.
Therefore
, it would
help
to
makes
a society
good
place to
live
there.
For example
, Indian
government
give
a long term
imprisonment
to
Dera
chief of
sirsa
Ram Rahim in the case of rape. After taking this decision by legal bodies, the
crime
rate
in the India is
minimise
at
some
extent.
Proceeding to the issue of why legal bodies should not
give
longer
imprisonment
to
offenders
.
First of all
, if
criminals
are
kept
in
prison
for long time period then
prisons
would become overcrowded.
Consequently
,
government
would spend more money to provide better facilities to
offenders
in the form of shelter, food, medical facility and clothes.
Secondly
,
some
criminals
who commit minor
crimes
such as
thieft
, robbery and
so
on. If
government
keep
to
those ones
in
prison
then it would be injustice for them.
Instead
of
imprisonment
, those
criminals
should
send
to rehabilitation center where they can learn new
skills
which may
change
the lifestyle and forget to do such
crimes
. Additional,
some
person
only
commit
crimes
when they confront unemployment due to lack of education
so
, legal authorities should provide better education and job to every citizen.
As a result
, it may
reduce
the
crime
rate
in the nation.
To sum up, it can be
confidently
conveyed that,
government
should
give
longer
imprisonment
to
only
those
offenders
who do
hard
core
crimes
.
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