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Some people believe Online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both the view and give your opinion. v.6

Some people believe Online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. v. 6
An education system has been certainly revolutionized as the enhancement of the technology. With the use of the Internet, a juvenile can get information about their interest and learn from that whenever they wish, while some intellectuals still opine that a hard copy of a textbook is used in the cultivation process. The essay discusses my stance with supporting arguments in the further paragraph. To begin with, the former view, the online tutorials has been intensified drastically around all over the globedue to its charecteristics of easy availability at inexpensive price. This will provide the wide range of informationto the pupils at the finguretips from a beginner to an expert level. Moreover, the digitization has promoted the environmeally friendly method of reading to the young generation. For example, to learn different programming language number of tutorials available even they also provide tools on which we can also do the practice during the nurture process. Because of this it is in most demand in the recent world. On the other hand, some people still perceive that to educate a child there is the compulsory need of the hard copy of the study material which would be used during the tutoring. The one cause is that this copy helps someone to make concentration on their study. This will help to achieve a particular future goals in the life. For instance, getting the information using the Internet some time distract the students as they were providing the advertised which attracts a disciple towards it easily. The other point is that during the reading if having access to book a person can highlight some crucial points which would be easily accessed in the second reading. In conclusion, With the help of traditional books one can not only focus more on studies, but also achieve their goals. However, nowadays, online teaching materials also serve the large data and increase its demand because of its liability. As per my opinion, it depends on the individual how they like to learn.
An education system has been
certainly
revolutionized as the enhancement of the technology. With the
use
of the Internet, a juvenile can
get
information about their interest and learn from that whenever they wish, while
some
intellectuals
still
opine that a
hard
copy of a textbook is
used
in the cultivation process. The essay discusses my stance with supporting arguments in the
further
paragraph.

To
begin
with, the former view, the online tutorials has
been intensified
drastically
around all over the
globedue
to its
charecteristics
of easy availability at inexpensive price. This will provide the wide range of
informationto
the pupils at the
finguretips
from a beginner to an expert level.
Moreover
, the digitization has promoted the
environmeally
friendly method of reading to the young generation.
For example
, to learn
different
programming language number of tutorials available even they
also
provide tools on which we can
also
do the practice during the nurture process.
Because
of this it is in most demand in the recent world.

On the other hand
,
some
people
still
perceive that to educate a child there is the compulsory need of the
hard
copy of the study material which would be
used
during the tutoring. The one cause is that this copy
helps
someone to
make
concentration on their study. This will
help
to achieve a particular future
goals
in the life.
For instance
, getting the information using the Internet
some
time
distract the students as they were providing the advertised which attracts a disciple towards it
easily
. The other point is that during the reading if having access to book a person can highlight
some
crucial points which would be
easily
accessed in the second reading.

In conclusion
, With the
help
of traditional books one can not
only
focus more on studies,
but
also
achieve their goals.
However
, nowadays, online teaching materials
also
serve the large data and increase its demand
because
of its liability. As per my opinion, it depends on the individual how they like to learn.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe Online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
334 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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