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Some people believe online reading materiale should only be wed tour a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. 19
Nowadays, plenty of materials for reading are available. Numerous of people think that to read, only online material should be used while others think use of printed material would be beneficial. This essay elucidates both views in trailed paragraphs along with the opinion at the end. To embark with, reading is an essential skill. Currrently, several materials are available to read from. However, printed reading materials are more convenient by people consequently they can easily concerate on the content. Moreover, their eyes do not get hurt owing to excessive strain. Reading through books can help youngsters to understand thoroughly and rapidly. It is believed that paper books are more safer than online material consequently one can easily read from it. Apart from that, most of the people prefer to read from ebooks rather than hardcopy. First and foremost, one can read from it whenever and wherever he wants, consequently it can be read from either mobile or laptop. Moreover, usage of paper will reduce by great margin. For instance, most of the schools and colleges switched to online classes during the time of pandemic. All the material such as books, notes and many more were shared over internet and it has been worked efficiently. However, sometime it can distracts the person while reading owing to the pop up messages on the screen and continuously reading from screen may hurt eyes. To conclude, reading from online material is convenient method though it has some demerits which can be overcome with regular usage.
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of
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materials
for
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reading
are available. Numerous of
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people
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think
that to
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read
,
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only
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online
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material
should be
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used
while others
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think
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use
of printed
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material
would be beneficial. This essay elucidates both views in trailed paragraphs along with the opinion at the
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end
.

To embark with,
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reading
is an essential
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skill
.
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Currrently
, several
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materials
are available to
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read
from.
However
, printed
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reading
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materials
are more convenient by
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people
consequently
they can
easily
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concerate
on the content.
Moreover
, their eyes do not
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get
hurt owing to excessive strain.
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Reading
through books can
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help
youngsters to understand
thoroughly
and
rapidly
. It
is believed
that paper books are
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more safer
than
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online
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material
consequently
one can
easily
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read
from it.

Apart from that, most of the
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people
prefer to
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read
from
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ebooks
rather
than
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hardcopy
.
First
and foremost, one can
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read
from it whenever and wherever he wants,
consequently
it can be
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read
from either mobile or laptop.
Moreover
, usage of paper will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
by great margin.
For instance
, most of the schools and colleges switched to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
classes during the time of pandemic. All the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
such as books, notes and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more
were shared
over internet and it has
been worked
efficiently
.
However
, sometime it can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "distract"
distracts
the person while
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reading
owing to the pop up messages on the screen and
continuously
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reading
from screen may hurt eyes.

To conclude
,
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reading
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
is convenient method though it has
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some
demerits which can
be overcome
with regular usage.
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IELTS essay Some people believe online reading materiale should only be wed tour a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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