Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.3
Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude.  v. 3
Nowadays, We are facing a lot of life threatening environmental problems around the world such as global warming, soaring temperature and increasing ultraviolet rays. Indeed, we are now in a situation to rethink about many aspects, in order to get rid of this life threat. Countries should discuss about these topics in United Nations Conferences, in order to find out solutions for these problems and then, to be implemented in each country to have a better living environment.
In my opinion, this topic must be discussed in the global forums as it can affect not only a single country, but also can affect the entire world. Moreover, these issues must be discussed in international level, which will help to get more expert views, helps to get an appropriate solution in the coming future. The governments of each country should start giving more awareness to their citizens on usage of plastics, cutting down trees, pollution and so on. In addition to this, the government should discourage the usage of plastic and encourage the public for a greener earth.
Not only discussing these matters at International level will make things better, these should be implemented at national level and progress to monitored by the authorities strictly. The government should take the initiative to educate the public on keeping our environment green. Otherwise, our successors will face huge implications in the near future.
To conclude, In my opinion, countries should discuss and take a possible solution for these issues together, at the same time, they should ensure that these guidelines are properly implemented, in order to have a safe environment for generations, to live in this planet. 
Nowadays, We are facing  
a lot of
 life threatening environmental problems around the world such as global warming, soaring temperature and increasing ultraviolet rays.  
Indeed
, we are  
now
 in a situation to rethink about  
many
 aspects, in order to  
get
 rid of this life threat.  
Countries
 should  
discuss about these
 topics in United Nations Conferences, in order to find out solutions for these problems and then, to  
be implemented
 in each  
country
 to have a better living environment.
In my opinion, this topic  
must
  be discussed
 in the global forums as it can affect not  
only
 a single  
country
,  
but
  also
 can affect the entire world.  
Moreover
, these issues  
must
  be discussed
 in international level, which will  
help
 to  
get
 more expert views,  
helps
 to  
get
 an appropriate solution in the coming future. The  
governments
 of each  
country
 should  
start
 giving more awareness to their citizens on usage of plastics, cutting down trees, pollution and  
so
 on.  
In addition
 to this, the  
government
 should discourage the usage of plastic and encourage the public for a greener earth.
Not  
only
 discussing these matters at International level will  
make
 things better, these should  
be implemented
 at national level and progress to monitored by the authorities  
strictly
. The  
government
 should take the initiative to educate the public on keeping our environment green.  
Otherwise
, our successors will face huge implications in the near future. 
To conclude
, In my opinion,  
countries
 should discuss and take a possible solution for these issues together, at the same time, they should ensure that these guidelines are  
properly
 implemented, in order to have a safe environment for generations, to  
live in this planet
. 
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes