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Some parents think that advertisements are misleading for children while advertisers claim that they provide knowledge Give you opinion v.2

Some parents think that advertisements are misleading for children while advertisers claim that they provide knowledge Give you opinion v. 2
In today's world, technology has taken over all the tasks which can be done by a human being, and have improved it up to an extent. The traditional newspaper also has been changed for many years, as some people prefer to read the news from hard print newspapers, while some of them prefers to consume content and news online. This essay will cover all of the vital points of Ebooks on traditional print media and news. Firstly, It's easier these days to carry a smartphone rather than a hard copy of a newspaper with you, And secondly, smartphone being compact and powered by a microprocessor goes to a huge extent and provides content, news and Ebooks. Not only it's easier to download thousands and thousands of books and read it on the go, but also it's not easy to carry those many books along with you, for instance, people these days love reading books while travelling and carrying books while on-board can be a really difficult task altogether. There are many advantages of Ebooks and Emagazines over paper based books and magazines, for example, ebooks and e-magazines being digital can save a lot of paper, which directly benefits the nature. Also, it's easier to delete an e-book or e-magazine when someone has finished it, rather than keeping all of those stacked in your house in the hard-copy form. Furthermore, you can share the e-books and e-magazines with your loved ones on e-mail, even if they are miles apart, which cannot be done with a paper based magazine. In conclusion, I completely agree that e-books and e-magazines will help us to restore the ecology and bring ease in our life, and in addition its quite important to save paper and spread awareness in the world.
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changed
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people
prefer to read the news from
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hard
print newspapers, while
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some
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on traditional print media and news.

Firstly
,
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hard
copy of a newspaper with you,

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books
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also
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people
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while travelling and carrying
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books
while on-board can be a
really
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There are
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advantages of
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and
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over paper based
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ebooks
and e-magazines being digital can save
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a lot of
paper, which
directly
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Also
,
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easier to delete an e-book or e-magazine when someone has finished it,
rather
than keeping all of those stacked in your
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house
in the
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hard
-copy form.
Furthermore
, you can share the e-books and e-magazines with your
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loved
ones on e-mail, even if they are miles apart, which cannot
be done
with a paper based magazine.

In conclusion
, I completely
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agree
that e-books and e-magazines will
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help
us to restore the ecology and bring
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ease
in our life, and
in addition
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its
quite
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important
to save paper and spread awareness in the world.
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IELTS essay Some parents think that advertisements are misleading for children while advertisers claim that they provide knowledge Give you opinion v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
294 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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