It is often argued that many parent permit their children to play computer games because they believe that this will help to build their technical skills. I think that, sitting in front of the computer and playing games in an early developing years of life has more disadvantages than benefits because this is not only harmful to children's eyesight but can also responsible for indulging their offspring into criminal activities.
To begin with, watching a computer screen for a more extended time will create a negative impact on a child's vision. Much research has proved that specific kinds of blue color light are emitting from the graphics which usually use in creating games and, this may damage the particular cells, "rods and cones" in the eye which are responsible for vision. For example, a recent survey conducted by the British medical council on the children who are wearing eye correction lenses. They found among them over 25% of those who are spending plenty of time playing computer games and sitting in front of the screen and moving their eyeball continuously.
Furthermore, some web games which many children enjoy to play have violent content which are responsible for making a child's criminal. Regularly playing such games will slowly and gradually embed the negative and antisocial behaviors in them. For example, some game has a rule that when a player shoots a person, will get points. As a result, the child is slowly implementing this rule in their lives. For instance, the Indian police solved a triple murder case last year, where they found out a group of children shooting people to obtain points because they were playing similar games on the computer.
In conclusion, I believe that despite incorporating technical skills, computer games create many negative impacts on the child physically as well as mentally.
It is
often
argued that
many
parent permit their
children
to play computer
games
because
they believe that this will
help
to build their technical
skills
. I
think
that, sitting in front of the computer and
playing
games
in an early developing
years
of life has more disadvantages than benefits
because
this is not
only
harmful to children's eyesight
but
can
also
responsible for indulging their offspring into criminal activities.
To
begin
with, watching a computer screen for a more extended time will create a
negative
impact on a child's vision. Much research has proved that specific kinds of blue color light are emitting from the graphics which
usually
use
in creating
games
and, this may damage the particular cells,
"
rods and cones
"
in the eye which are responsible for vision.
For example
, a recent survey conducted by the British medical council on the
children
who are wearing eye correction lenses. They found among them over 25% of those who are spending
plenty
of time
playing
computer
games
and sitting in front of the screen and moving their eyeball
continuously
.
Furthermore
,
some
web
games
which
many
children
enjoy to play have violent content which are responsible for making a child's criminal.
Regularly
playing
such
games
will
slowly
and
gradually
embed the
negative
and antisocial behaviors in them.
For example
,
some
game has a
rule
that when a player shoots a person, will
get
points.
As a result
, the child is
slowly
implementing this
rule
in their
lives
.
For instance
, the Indian police solved a triple murder case last year, where they found out a group of
children
shooting
people
to obtain points
because
they were
playing
similar
games
on the computer.
In conclusion
, I believe that despite incorporating technical
skills
, computer
games
create
many
negative
impacts on the child
physically
as well
as mentally.
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