Some parents say that giving expensive gifts to a child can create bad habits in him/her. Agree or disagree. v.3
Some parents say that giving expensive gifts to a child can create bad habits in him/her. Agree or disagree. v. 3
These days many parents are buying expensive gifts for their children. While some argue that such gifts create a detrimental effect on them, I, however, agree with this view for two reasons.
The primary reason why most parents should not buy such gifts is that children do not value it. To elucidate, the majority of teenagers do not give importance to such expensive gifts because they are not enough mature to handle it and could spoil it intentionally or unintentionally. Also, most children often get bored easily and do not use or touch them again. For example, a survey conducted by the Child Welfare Organisation in India found that 85% of teenagers do not see or use those expensive gifts again that are bought from their parents. Therefore, parents should not get such costly gifts for them.
Another reason is getting addicted to buying such expensive gifts every time. It is true that once a child gets such costly gift they become addicted to having such valuable items in the future even though their parents do not financially sound. For instance, in China, 55% of children want expensive phones such as the latest version of the iPhone or the Samsung from their parents as they bought once from them earlier. Such habits not only does it spoil them, but also put mentally and financially pressure on their parents. Hence, they do not allow their children to get such costly gifts.
In conclusion, although some are in the favour of buying valuable gifts for their children is good, I disagree with them as children do not value such presents, spoils them knowingly or unknowingly and lead to them to have always such gifts with them.
These days
many
parents
are buying
expensive
gifts
for their
children
. While
some
argue that such
gifts
create a detrimental effect on them, I,
however
,
agree
with this view for two reasons.
The primary reason why most
parents
should not
buy
such
gifts
is that
children
do not value it. To elucidate, the majority of
teenagers
do not give importance to such
expensive
gifts
because
they are not
enough
mature to handle it and could spoil it
intentionally
or
unintentionally
.
Also
, most
children
often
get
bored
easily
and do not
use
or touch them again.
For example
, a survey conducted by the Child Welfare
Organisation
in India found that 85% of
teenagers
do not
see
or
use
those
expensive
gifts
again that are
bought
from their
parents
.
Therefore
,
parents
should not
get
such costly
gifts
for them.
Another reason is getting addicted to buying such
expensive
gifts
every time. It is true that once a child
gets
such costly
gift
they become addicted to having such valuable items in the future
even though
their
parents
do not
financially
sound.
For instance
, in China, 55% of
children
want
expensive
phones such as the latest version of the iPhone or the Samsung from their
parents
as they
bought
once from them earlier. Such habits not
only
does it spoil them,
but
also
put mentally and
financially
pressure on their
parents
.
Hence
, they do not
allow
their
children
to
get
such costly gifts.
In conclusion
, although
some
are in the
favour
of buying valuable
gifts
for their
children
is
good
, I disagree with them as
children
do not value such presents, spoils them
knowingly
or
unknowingly
and lead to them to have always such
gifts
with them.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes