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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. To what extent do you agree with this view? v.21

Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. v. 21
In these days publicity is being inappropriate to the public. And there are people believing this advertise and spending their money on a false information. I fully agree and In this essay I'm going to write my opinion in this matter. Firstly, The main reason of advertisement is to make people know about your identity or the product that you are selling. Even if it was in a wrong way, or by tricking peoples minds. The point is to be popular and to raise your profit. For example, Many companies now is using social media influences and paying them a huge amount of money to oversell their products by getting customers for them. Even if the influence gives the customers misleading information which can harm their health. Sometimes, there are humans buying the product and telling their closest friend and family about it but it's actually contains unlicensed ingredient. To illustrate, There has been a breaking news on the BBC telling about a woman lost a lot of hair just because she bought a shampoo which was promoted to her by an influential. Secondly, some of advertiser is targeting young people. For instance, Burger king attracts children with the toys that come with the meal. Moreover, some research shows that their food is unhealthy and can cause obesity and health issues. Therefore the gourmet should apply some taxes for the junk food industry. To conclude, I think advertising plays a crucial part in the marketing field, but sometimes give people misleading information and fool them to buy the product.
In these
days
publicity is being inappropriate to the public. And there are
people
believing
this advertise
and spending their money on
a false information
. I
fully
agree
and In this essay I'm going to write my opinion in this matter.

Firstly
, The main reason of advertisement is to
make
people
know about your identity or the
product
that you are selling. Even if it was in a
wrong
way, or by tricking
peoples
minds. The point is to be popular and to raise your profit.
For example
,
Many
companies
now
is using social media influences and paying them a huge amount of money to oversell their
products
by getting customers for them.
Even if
the influence gives the customers misleading information which can harm their health.
Sometimes
, there are humans buying the
product
and telling their closest friend and family about it
but
it's actually contains unlicensed ingredient. To illustrate, There has been
a breaking news
on the BBC telling about a woman lost
a lot of
hair
just
because
she
bought
a shampoo which
was promoted
to her by
an influential
.

Secondly
,
some of advertiser
is targeting young
people
.
For instance
,
Burger king
attracts children with the toys that
come
with the meal.
Moreover
,
some
research
shows
that their food is unhealthy and can cause obesity and health issues.
Therefore
the gourmet should apply
some
taxes for the junk food industry.

To conclude
, I
think
advertising plays a crucial part in the marketing field,
but
sometimes
give
people
misleading information and fool them to
buy
the
product
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. v. 21

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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Lexical Resource: 8.0
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Grammatical Range: 8.0
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