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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include v.38

: Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. 38
Nature is an integral part of our lite. It is a blessing that goods bestow on us. Natural provide us with the dramatic increase of goods, the natural is deteriorating at a very fast rate. This essay will discuss some reasons why people do not understand its importance, and some ways they can learn more about it. On the one hand, the world’s population is increasing day by day, which is one of reason for pollution. As the growth of population, we are not using natural resources. It is believed that nothing can save when a human change their mind about safe their life environment. The industrial activities are the way to cause the air pollution and water pollution, which would damage the marine and terrestrial animals. The fact that deforestation to get the wood to make the furniture would lead to the soil erosion. There is some the solution of goods consuming, the politicians impose punishment on companies that harm to the environment during the production process. On the other hand, oil exploitation is a way to depletion of natural resources. For instance, some famous brands of drinks started an activity that the drink will be discounted if the costumers bring their own cup. There are very good idea for reducing the goods in plastic and raise awareness for the residents, which encourage them using eco-friendlier product. It creates a good habit for people to save the community environment. To conclude, the government and people need to join a hand in manufacturing process more environmentally friendly. Having awareness of environment will bring a healthier, cleaner and convenient accommodation for residents.
Nature is an integral part of our lite. It is a blessing that
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goods
bestow on us.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Natural
provide us with the dramatic increase of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
, the
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natural
is deteriorating at a
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very
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fast
rate. This essay will discuss
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some
reasons why
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
do not understand its importance, and
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some
ways they can learn more about it.

On the one hand, the world’s population is increasing day by day, which is one of reason for pollution. As the growth of population, we are not using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
resources. It
is believed
that nothing can save when a human
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
their mind about safe their life environment. The industrial activities are the way to cause the air pollution and water pollution, which would damage the marine and terrestrial animals. The fact that deforestation to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the wood to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the furniture would lead to the soil erosion. There is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
the solution of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
consuming, the politicians impose punishment on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
that harm to the environment during the production process.

On the other hand
, oil exploitation is a way to depletion of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
resources.
For instance
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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famous
brands of drinks
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
an activity that the drink will
be discounted
if the costumers bring their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
cup. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
for reducing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
in plastic and raise awareness for the residents, which encourage them using
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eco-friendlier
product. It creates a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
habit for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to save the community environment.

To conclude
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
a hand in manufacturing process more
environmentally
friendly. Having awareness of environment will bring a healthier, cleaner and convenient accommodation for residents.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay : Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. 38

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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