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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? v.14

The map shows how a village called Ryemouth has developed over the last twenty-five years. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing industry, and the introduction of sports facilities. In 1995, to the south of the village where the sea is, there was previously a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market as well. Next to this was a small cafe. On the other side of the road running by the sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while situated in the north east part of the village was farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of the village was located in the north west around a main road that runs from the coastal road, with twelve houses, four of them encircled by a smaller side-street. Turning to the present day map, it can be seen that the fishing facilities have all gone, being replaced by four apartments, and the shops have become restaurants. The cafe remains, as does the hotel, along with parking facilities which it did not have before. Having been converted into a golf course, the farmland has now gone, while the forest park has been removed to make way for tennis courts. Although the old houses remain, new ones have been built, along with a new road with two new houses beside it.
The map
shows
how a
village
called
Ryemouth
has developed over the last

twenty-five years. There have been several
changes
, the most noticeable

being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing

industry, and the introduction of sports facilities.

In 1995, to the south of the
village
where the sea is, there was previously

a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market
as well
.

Next
to this was a
small
cafe
. On the other side of the
road
running by the

sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while situated in the
north east


part of the
village
was farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of

the
village
was located
in the
north west
around a main
road
that runs from

the coastal
road
, with twelve
houses
, four of them encircled by a smaller

side-street. Turning to the present day map, it can be
seen
that the fishing facilities have

all gone,
being replaced
by four apartments, and the shops have become

restaurants. The
cafe
remains, as does the hotel, along with parking

facilities which it did not have
before
. Having
been converted
into a golf

course, the farmland has
now
gone, while the forest park has
been removed


to
make
way for tennis courts. Although the
old
houses
remain, new ones

have
been built
, along with a new
road
with two new
houses
beside it.
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IELTS academic : Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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