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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? v.14

The map shows how a village called Ryemouth has developed over the last twenty-five years. There have been several changes, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing industry, and the introduction of sports facilities. In 1995, to the south of the village where the sea is, there was previously a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market as well. Next to this was a small cafe. On the other side of the road running by the sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while situated in the north east part of the village was farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of the village was located in the north west around a main road that runs from the coastal road, with twelve houses, four of them encircled by a smaller side-street. Turning to the present day map, it can be seen that the fishing facilities have all gone, being replaced by four apartments, and the shops have become restaurants. The cafe remains, as does the hotel, along with parking facilities which it did not have before. Having been converted into a golf course, the farmland has now gone, while the forest park has been removed to make way for tennis courts. Although the old houses remain, new ones have been built, along with a new road with two new houses beside it.

The map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 how a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 called Possible spelling mistake found.Rye mouth
Ryemouth
 has developed over the last

twenty-five years. There have been several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, the most noticeable

being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing

industry, and the introduction of sports facilities.

In 1995, to the south of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 where the sea is, there was previously

a fishing industry, with a fishing port and quite a large fish market as well
.

Next
 to this was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
‘cafe’ is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using “café”café
cafe
. On the other side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 running by the

sea stood a line of five shops and a hotel, while situated in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east


part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 was farmland and a park with trees. The main housing of

the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
was located
 in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.north-westnorthwest
north west
 around a main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 that runs from

the coastal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, with twelve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, four of them encircled by a smaller

side-street. Turning to the present day map, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the fishing facilities have

all gone, being replaced
 by four apartments, and the shops have become

restaurants. The ‘cafe’ is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using “café”café
cafe
 remains, as does the hotel, along with parking

facilities which it did not have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. Having been converted
 into a golf

course, the farmland has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 gone, while the forest park has been removed


to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for tennis courts. Although the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 remain, new ones

have been built
, along with a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 with two new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 beside it. 