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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? v.1

Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. v. 1
Advertisements are ways of telling people about products, jobs and services. Different organizations and companies advertise their goods and services in order to increase visibility and sales. Nowadays, many believe that most methods of advertising are immoral and inappropriate. I strongly agree with this notion, owing to the fact that these approaches has done more harm than good. That is, they either promote favouritism or nudity. Some of the ways of advertising sends the wrong messages to viewers. Firstly, light skinned models are often used in adverts, making women with dark skin to believe they are not beautiful. For example, all cosmetic companies employ fair models to promote their products. This in turn, favours one skin tone over the other and therefore, black skinned women turn to harsh chemicals to modify and enhance their beauty. This has led to the recent increment in bleaching of the skin. Secondly, the rate at which woman go naked in the name of advertising is appalling. Every opportunity is ceased to preach nudity. For example, I recently watched a beverage company's advert where a scarcely clothed lady was featured. And I ask, what does nudity have to do with beverages? Not to mention that these indecency exposes young minds to all manner of sexual explorations. In conclusion, although adverts are means through which different companies boost sales, visibility and communicates to the masses about their products and services, I believe some of them go about it in the most unethical and inappropriate ways. Which has caused many women to bleach their skin to look attractive, and children to be exposed to nudity.
Advertisements are ways of telling
people
about products, jobs and services.
Different
organizations and
companies
advertise their
goods
and services in order to increase visibility and sales. Nowadays,
many
believe that most methods of advertising are immoral and inappropriate. I
strongly
agree
with this notion, owing to the fact that these approaches has done more harm than
good
.
That is
, they either promote
favouritism
or nudity.

Some of the
ways of advertising
sends
the
wrong
messages to viewers.
Firstly
, light skinned models are
often
used
in adverts, making women with dark skin to believe they are not
beautiful
.
For example
, all cosmetic
companies
employ
fair
models to promote their products. This in turn,
favours
one skin tone over the other and
therefore
, black skinned women turn to harsh chemicals to modify and enhance their beauty. This has led to the recent increment in bleaching of the skin.

Secondly
, the rate at which woman go naked in the name of advertising is appalling. Every opportunity
is ceased
to preach nudity.
For example
, I recently
watched
a beverage
company
's advert where a
scarcely
clothed lady
was featured
. And I ask, what does nudity
have to
do with beverages? Not to mention that these indecency exposes young minds to all manner of sexual explorations.

In conclusion
, although adverts are means through which
different
companies
boost sales, visibility and communicates to the masses about their products and services, I believe
some
of them go about it in the most unethical and inappropriate ways. Which has caused
many
women to bleach their skin to look attractive, and children to
be exposed
to nudity.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6
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