Some high school required all student to wear school; other high school permit students to decide what to wear to school. v.1
Some high school required all student to wear school; other high school permit students to decide what to wear to school. v. 1
Are school uniforms important? While some colleges, especially the ones in western countries, allow their students to determine what they wear to school, schools here do not permit such and only wants their student to wear a specific uniform. In my view, I completely agree with the latter assertion.
For those who leave the decision of what to wear to school for students, the claim is that this attitude does not affect the optimum goal of schooling-learning practical and theoretical principles of life. In supporting this point, it is said that once students in high schools are properly taught, the need to look at what is being worn becomes inconsequential. But, when they are allowed to loaf around rather than concentrate on school works, then things like fashion becomes a topic of consideration.
However, in my opinion, which is the same as the belief in this part of the world, school uniform is important to distinguish and create uniformity for colleges. For example, students of the numerous schools around my area can easily be differentiated, especially in moments of emergencies such as a large mass casualty. Additionally, it is also believed that wearing uniform help remove any emphasis on fashion and makes education the focus. In this way, anxiety associated with fashion and the number of clothes a student put on per week is eliminated from their psychology.
In conclusion, while some do not see the need for school uniform in high schools because they believe it does not have a significant effect if the students are well taught, others think that a sense of identity is important and I share this view too
Are
school
uniforms
important
? While
some
colleges,
especially
the ones in western countries,
allow
their
students
to determine what they wear to
school
,
schools
here do not permit such and
only
wants their
student
to wear a specific
uniform
. In my view, I completely
agree
with the latter assertion.
For those who
leave
the decision of what to wear to
school
for
students
, the claim is that this attitude does not affect the optimum goal of schooling-learning practical and theoretical principles of life. In supporting this point, it
is said
that once
students
in high
schools
are
properly
taught, the need to look at what is
being worn
becomes inconsequential.
But
, when they are
allowed
to loaf around
rather
than concentrate on
school
works, then things like fashion becomes a topic of consideration.
However
, in my opinion, which is the same as the belief in this part of the world,
school
uniform
is
important
to distinguish and create uniformity for colleges.
For example
,
students
of the numerous
schools
around my area can
easily
be differentiated
,
especially
in moments of emergencies such as a large mass casualty.
Additionally
, it is
also
believed that wearing
uniform
help
remove any emphasis on fashion and
makes
education the focus. In this way, anxiety associated with fashion and the number of clothes a
student
put on per week
is eliminated
from their psychology.
In conclusion
, while
some
do not
see
the need for
school
uniform
in high
schools
because
they believe it does not have a significant effect if the
students
are well taught, others
think
that a sense of identity is
important
and I share this view too
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