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SOME FILM COMPANIES SPEND MILLIONS OF DOLLARS ON THE PRODUCTION OF A SINGLE MOVIE. IS IT NECESSARY TO SPEND A LOT OF MONEY TO MAKE A GOOD MOVIE? WHAT FACTORS CONTRIBUTE TO THE SUCCESS OF A MOVIE? v.2

SOME FILM COMPANIES SPEND MILLIONS OF DOLLARS ON THE PRODUCTION OF A SINGLE MOVIE. IS IT NECESSARY TO SPEND A LOT OF MONEY TO MAKE A GOOD MOVIE? WHAT FACTORS CONTRIBUTE TO THE SUCCESS OF A MOVIE? v. 2
Nowadays people watch movies to overcome stress in daily life, so the demand of quality films has increased. To meet these demands some organizations spend way too much on making a film. Money does play a vital role in the success of a movie with other important factors too. In this essay, I would be discussing important factors besides money, for a movie to be successful. Money is essential for the production of movies but spending a lot does not guarantee its success. This means a proper financial budget should be planned accordingly for making a film. It has also been observed that not all high budget movies are appreciated by the viewers. For instance, a movie casting highly paid actors and spending too much on locations also has an equal chance of failure. Moreover, low budget movies have been very successful in recent times. Indeed, there are a plethora of factors that play a vital role in a film’s success. Firstly, the story of a movie, the way it is written, directed and performed propagates its success. This means that the story of a film should be fascinating and interesting, attracting the audience. In addition, actors performing and having a range of diversified skills is another important factor. The audience appreciates these skills making a movie successful. For example, recently a movie named “Joker” has really been successful and admired by the viewers. People have really enjoyed the acting skills of the main lead actor. This means the success of a movie is not totally dependent on the money spent. To conclude, there are a variety of factors contributing in a film’s success rather than emphasizing only on the high budget for a film. The amount of money spent on the movie does not assure its success.
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watch
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movies
to overcome
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stress
in daily life,
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so
the demand of quality films has increased. To
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meet
these demands
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some
organizations spend way too much on making a film.
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Money
does play a vital role in the
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success
of a
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movie
with other
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important
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factors
too. In this essay, I would be discussing
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important
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factors
besides
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money
, for a
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movie
to be successful.

Money is essential for the production of
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movies
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but
spending a lot does not guarantee its
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success
. This means a proper financial
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budget
should
be planned
accordingly
for making a film. It has
also
been observed
that not all high
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budget
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movies
are appreciated
by the viewers.
For instance
, a
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movie
casting
highly
paid actors and spending too much on locations
also
has an equal chance of failure.
Moreover
, low
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budget
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movies
have been
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very
successful in recent times.

Indeed
, there are a plethora of
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factors
that play a vital role in a film’s
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success
.
Firstly
, the story of a
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movie
, the way it
is written
, directed and performed propagates its
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success
. This means that the story of a film should be fascinating and interesting, attracting the audience.
In addition
, actors performing and having a range of diversified
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skills
is another
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important
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factor
. The audience appreciates these
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skills
making a
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movie
successful.
For example
, recently a
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movie
named “Joker” has
really
been successful and admired by the viewers.
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People
have
really
enjoyed the acting
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skills
of the main lead actor. This means the
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success
of a
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movie
is not
totally
dependent on the
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money
spent.

To conclude
, there are a variety of
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factors
contributing in a film’s
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success
rather
than emphasizing
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only
on the high
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budget
for a film. The amount of
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money
spent on the
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movie
does not assure its
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success
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay SOME FILM COMPANIES SPEND MILLIONS OF DOLLARS ON THE PRODUCTION OF A SINGLE MOVIE. IS IT NECESSARY TO SPEND A LOT OF MONEY TO MAKE A GOOD MOVIE? WHAT FACTORS CONTRIBUTE TO THE SUCCESS OF A MOVIE? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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