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In the modern world, the image( photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v.6

In the modern world, the image( photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 6
For understanding people using images are a better policy than by writing. My writing agrees that writing words in the booklet is not tough, but to recognise it too hard for common people. The photograph gives human less effort to understand. At first, this essay will describe the students beneficial side of their study and in the second, how photograph gives opportunity to the company. By suitable images adolescents can cover their lesson easily. To illustrate, in the ancient time writing was the main style of studying, but in modern era photographs and films are the superior side of the teenagers. Even they do not waste their valuable time behind reading books due to the proper indication in several images. Most of the schools deliver computers and tablets, to make the student parts more easier. According to the report of many scientists "Give younger people visualize education rather than paper based". Business holders derive compatible benefit by the modem process. Moreover, advertisement is the key root of doing business. By using modern images merchant gives an easy system idea to purchase the things and the customers express their opinion within a moment. Different websites like Facebook, WhatsApp, YouTube and Imo provide spare side which is only allowed for advertising. After that, it gives them a huge amount of cash. BD news 24 which is a renowned newspaper in Bangladesh revealed a news that almost 90% of businessmen in Asia use advertise for spreading their fame. To conclude, pictures are the incredible sector to increase the youngster concern on the study. Merchandise is also totally relies on the photograph.
For understanding
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people
using
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images
are a better policy than by
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writing
. My
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writing
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agrees
that
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writing
words in the booklet is not tough,
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but
to
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recognise
it too
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hard
for common
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people
. The
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photograph
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gives
human less effort to understand. At
first
, this essay will
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describe
the students beneficial side of their study and in the second, how
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photograph
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gives
opportunity to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

By suitable
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images
adolescents can cover their lesson
easily
. To illustrate, in the ancient time
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writing
was the main style of studying,
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but
in modern era
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photographs
and films are the superior side of the
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teenagers
. Even they do not waste their valuable time behind reading books due to the proper indication in several
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images
. Most of the schools deliver computers and tablets, to
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make
the student parts
Use only "easier" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more easier
. According to the report of
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many
scientists
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"
Give younger
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people
visualize education
rather
than paper based
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"
.

Business holders derive compatible benefit by the modem process.
Moreover
, advertisement is the key root of doing business. By using modern
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images
merchant
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gives
an easy system
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idea
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
the things and the customers express their opinion within a moment.
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Different
websites like Facebook, WhatsApp, YouTube and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Imo
provide spare side which is
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only
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allowed
for advertising. After that, it
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gives
them a huge amount of cash.
The genitive is possibly missing.
BD news
24 which is a renowned newspaper in Bangladesh revealed
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a news
that almost 90% of businessmen in Asia
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use
advertise for spreading their fame.

To conclude
, pictures are the incredible sector to increase the youngster concern on the study. Merchandise is
also
totally
relies on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
photograph
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay In the modern world, the image( photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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