Education is the key to success. Nowadays international exchange visits become more popular and some educational specialises considered that these are advantageous for teenagers at the school. To a great extent do you agree with this concept.
To begin with, different overseas visits provide various knowledge and information to students which would be helpful for higher classes too. These abroad to allow the team students to get a first hand experience of different societies and their culture, customs and values that widen their education horizon. For example, western culture is entirely different from Asian society and visiting the Asian culture and customs diversities provide an exposure of knowledge to the teenagers. In addition to that it allows pupils to mingle with other team students and can build a good relationship.
Furthermore, the international exchange programmes help to the teenagers mould a good personality and acquire self -reliance in life. This type of tour force them to do their daily routine themselves without the support of parents that promote independence and confidence. For instance, institutions are for organisations conducting this type of overseas trips posses limited authorised volunteers and they might divide the students into groups also allocate responsibilities which force them to do perfectly. Others people get encouraged to finish their goals perfectly that make some confident. On one hand, this exposure would be area formation of their lives.
To conclude, abroad visits are more beneficial than disadvantages by enabling students to understand and mingle with the other society and also made them to be a holder of good personality.
Education is the key to success. Nowadays international exchange visits become more popular and
some
educational
specialises
considered that these are advantageous for
teenagers
at the school. To a great extent do you
agree
with this concept.
To
begin
with,
different
overseas visits provide various knowledge and information to
students
which would be helpful for higher classes too. These abroad to
allow
the team
students
to
get
a
first hand
experience of
different
societies and their culture, customs and values that widen their education horizon.
For example
, western culture is
entirely
different
from Asian society and visiting the Asian culture and customs diversities provide an exposure of knowledge to the
teenagers
.
In addition
to that it
allows
pupils to mingle with other team
students
and can build a
good
relationship.
Furthermore
, the international exchange
programmes
help
to the
teenagers
mould
a
good
personality and acquire self -reliance in life. This type of tour force them to do their daily routine themselves without the support of parents that promote independence and confidence.
For instance
, institutions are for
organisations
conducting this type of overseas trips posses limited
authorised
volunteers and
they might divide the
students
into groups
also
allocate responsibilities which force them to do
perfectly
. Others
people
get
encouraged to finish their goals
perfectly
that
make
some
confident. On one hand, this exposure would be area formation of their
lives
.
To conclude
, abroad visits are more beneficial than disadvantages by enabling
students
to understand and mingle with the other society and
also
made them to be a holder of
good
personality.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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