Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion v.4
Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. 4
It is common to see players wearing the products from sponsorships during sports games, such as a football match. Supporters of this kind of advertising think that this is a positive approach for companies to promote their products, while I personally believe that doing so may affect a player's performance during the competition.
Firstly, one of the positive benefits of sports teams is that they are able to obtain a number of free resources from sponsors and do not have to be distracted by financial worries. Simultaneously, when players wear the products from sponsorships, it can produce a lot of opportunities to expose their brand on social media platforms, in which the sales are much faster than traditional advertisements on TV.
On the other hand, there can be drawbacks from advertisements which display products which are harmful to people’s health. For instance, once players get paid for the advertisement, they have to drink high sugar products in order to stimulate sales. This affects the number of players˙ fans following their behaviour which has an impact on obesity problems in the public. Even though advertising can support players to reduce their pressure on finance, I would say that no all of the products are suited for encouraging people to purchase.
In conclusion, although advertising in sports supports players to do well, some products may cause health issues. However, in my opinion, people should take into account that player's invisible pressure from product sales can influence their performance.
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It is common to
see
players
wearing the
products
from sponsorships during sports games, such as a football match. Supporters of this kind of advertising
think
that this is a
positive
approach for
companies
to promote their
products
, while I
personally
believe that doing
so
may affect a player's performance during the competition.
Firstly
, one of the
positive
benefits of sports teams is that they are able to obtain a number of free resources from sponsors and do not
have to
be distracted
by financial worries.
Simultaneously
, when
players
wear the
products
from sponsorships, it can produce
a lot of
opportunities to expose their brand on social media platforms, in which the sales are much faster than traditional advertisements on TV.
On the other hand
, there can be drawbacks from advertisements which display
products
which are harmful to
people
’s health.
For instance
, once
players
get
paid for the advertisement, they
have to
drink high sugar
products
in order to stimulate sales. This affects the number of
players˙
fans following their
behaviour
which has an impact on obesity problems in the public.
Even though
advertising can support
players
to
reduce
their pressure on finance, I would say that no
all of the
products
are suited
for encouraging
people
to
purchase
.
In conclusion
, although advertising in sports supports
players
to do well,
some
products
may cause health issues.
However
, in my opinion,
people
should take into account that player's invisible pressure from
product
sales can influence their performance.
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