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scientists predict that humans will speak the same language in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? v.1

scientists predict that humans will speak the same language in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? v. 1
The omnipresence of some languages around the globe has resulted in an anticipation that one specific language will be worldwide spoken by all people in the future. While this trend offers some undeniable benefits, I believe that it is a negative development. On the one hand, it is true that an universal dialect may help remove language barriers, allowing people from different parts of the world to convey their thoughts and ideas more effectively. Using the same language would, as a result, facilitate many fields including international business transactors, cross-border cooperation and tourism. The emergence of English as the predominant communicative language has testified for this advantage. Furthermore, without linguistic barriers, any country could freely communicate and cooperate with others, forming a global village with a myriad of unprecedented opportunities. On the other hand, I am of the belief that those aforementioned advantages are negligible when compared with the potential consequence. As people around the world speak merely one language, this would lead to the disappearance of many other languages which are integral to national identities of any country. For example, some ethnics’ cultures in Taiwan would be on the edge of extinction, if minor languages of these tribes are replaced by one global dialect, which poses a dire threat to Taiwan’s cultural diversity. In conclusion, it seems that people can reap a great number of benefits regarding communication thanks to the use of an universal dialect. I firmly hold the view that the drawbacks should not be overlooked and concrete actions should be taken to retain the linguistic diversity in the world.
The omnipresence of
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some
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around the globe has resulted in an anticipation that one specific
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language
will be worldwide spoken by all
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people
in the future. While this trend offers
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some
undeniable benefits, I believe that it is a
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negative
development.

On the one hand, it is true that
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an
universal dialect may
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help
remove
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language
barriers, allowing
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people
from
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different
parts of the world to convey their thoughts and
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ideas
more
effectively
. Using the same
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language
would,
as a result
, facilitate
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many
fields including international business transactors, cross-border cooperation and tourism. The emergence of English as the predominant communicative
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language
has testified for this advantage.
Furthermore
, without linguistic barriers, any country could
freely
communicate and cooperate with others, forming a global village with a myriad of unprecedented opportunities.

On the other hand
, I am of the belief that those aforementioned advantages are negligible when compared with the potential consequence. As
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people
around the world speak
merely
one
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language
, this would lead to the disappearance of
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many
other
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languages
which are integral to national identities of any country.
For example
,
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some
ethnics’ cultures in Taiwan would be on the edge of extinction, if minor
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languages
of these tribes
are replaced
by one global dialect, which poses a dire threat to Taiwan’s cultural diversity.

In conclusion
, it seems that
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people
can reap a great number of benefits regarding communication thanks to the
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use
of
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an
universal dialect. I
firmly
hold the view that the drawbacks should not
be overlooked
and concrete actions should
be taken
to retain the linguistic diversity in the world.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS essay scientists predict that humans will speak the same language in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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