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Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buidings. People think that they should be free to choose the design they live. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. v.1

Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buidings. People think that they should be free to choose the design they live. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. v. 1
The residents do have freedom in the design and formation of their houses and governments has no restriction on constructing buildings with the idea of owners. The benefits of implementing the architecture and construction chosen by the authority of houses have significant value, though the shortcomings regarding this attitude, I believe, have eclipsed all its advantages. To begin with, as the bureaucrats of a country have a loose regulation on building the houses of certain areas, people show their creativity regarding this. This allows designers and constructors to open new ideas and improves the infrastructure of that particular area by using new materials and plans designed by the local authority. Moreover, when the owners of the houses decide to build their buildings, they reflect their personal feelings, attachment, emotions in those places. For example, in Sylhet, there are different types of buildings and houses, which have been created by the idea of the owner, which may, eventually, lead to describe their viewpoint and feelings to this structure. Thus, it expresses a sense of satisfaction and contentment as well, since each house presents with aesthetic beauty with a divine look. In contrast, although people are building their houses without any intervention of governments and construction heart-touching monumental structure with living beauty, the houses are facing various types of problems such as earthquakes, rising sea-levels in coastal areas, to name but a few. This is a huge loss for the property owner, consequently, leads to the mass devastation of various beautiful buildings. To cite an instance, in Vietnam, governments have no rules and regulations in delivering the plan of houses and offices which sometimes, shakes, not only with a Tsunami, but it also blows away roofs with heavy wind and even uprooted the infrastructure. Therefore, the observation of governments before building any type of structure has played a vital role to make the building alive decades after decades. In conclusion, people are, invariably, welcome in choosing their desired design when building offices and houses and some areas are independent from governments' participation in providing design and construction of the residential areas, while it has advantages, but the benefits, in my opinion, have overshadowed by its drawbacks.
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houses
and
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governments
has no restriction on constructing
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buildings
with the
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idea
of
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owners
. The benefits of implementing the architecture and construction chosen by the authority of
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houses
have significant value, though the shortcomings regarding this attitude, I believe, have eclipsed all its advantages.

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begin
with, as the bureaucrats of a country have a loose regulation on
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building
the
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houses
of certain
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areas
,
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people
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show
their creativity regarding this. This
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allows
designers and constructors to open new
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ideas
and
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improves
the infrastructure of that particular
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area
by using new materials and plans designed by the local authority.
Moreover
, when the
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owners
of the
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houses
decide to build their
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buildings
, they reflect their personal feelings, attachment, emotions in those places.
For example
, in
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Sylhet
, there are
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different
types of
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buildings
and
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houses
, which have
been created
by the
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idea
of the
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owner
, which may,
eventually
, lead to
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describe
their viewpoint and feelings to this structure.
Thus
, it expresses a sense of satisfaction and contentment
as well
, since each
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house
presents with aesthetic beauty with a divine look.

In contrast
, although
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people
are
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building
their
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houses
without any intervention of
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governments
and construction heart-touching monumental structure with living beauty, the
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houses
are facing various types of problems such as earthquakes, rising sea-levels in coastal
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areas
, to name
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but
a few. This is a huge loss for the property
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owner
,
consequently
, leads to the mass devastation of various
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beautiful
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buildings
. To cite an instance, in Vietnam,
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governments
have no
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rules
and regulations in delivering the plan of
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houses
and offices which
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sometimes
, shakes, not
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only
with a Tsunami,
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but
it
also
blows away roofs with heavy wind and even uprooted the infrastructure.
Therefore
, the observation of
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governments
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before
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building
any type of structure has played a vital role to
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make
the
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building
alive decades after decades.

In conclusion
,
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people
are,
invariably
, welcome in choosing their desired design when
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building
offices and
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houses
and
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some
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areas
are
The usual collocation for "independent" is "of" not "from". Did you mean "independent of"?
independent from
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governments
' participation in providing design and construction of the residential
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areas
, while it has advantages,
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but
the benefits, in my opinion, have overshadowed by its drawbacks.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buidings. People think that they should be free to choose the design they live. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
364 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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