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Some believe that those who are not talented in language learning should not be required to learn a foreign language. Do you think school should require students to learn a foreign language? v.2

Some believe that those who are not talented in language learning should not be required to learn a foreign language. Do you think school should require students to learn a foreign language? v. 2
The need for linguistic skills are of paramount importance in todays' society. However, a majority of people is of the opinion that learning new foreign languages should not be mandatory for students who possess no special aptitudes in this area. Personally, i think that acquiring new languages should still be demanded at schools regardless of the pupils' academic achievements. Regarding the latter viewpoint, anything is possible if we have great determination and commitments. Although some children may find it difficult to understanding different languages, memorizing new worlds or even suffer from diseases related to hearing and speaking, it is by no means clear that we are allowed to let them desist from learning foreign languages as it will immensely affect their job career prospects and their futures as a whole. Instead, we should take great care of each students by motivating them and make their progresses more easily seen with an effective teaching style. For instance, at the school where I studied, all the English teachers incorporated many teaching methods into their lessons such as including quizzes and games and have their students record their daily achievements, which made the lessons considerably more compelling and helped the pupils to progressed well. Additionally, with the rapid development of technology, the process of learning new languages can thankfully be more easier as the students can solve most of their problems through browsing the internet. However, some internet sources can be may be unreliable or even misleading and it is the role of teachers and parents generally to ensure that the use of the internet remains a guided learning process. To conclude, i feel that learning foreign languages, with their wide uses in the economy, should remain an integral part of the curriculum for all students and that teachers must do their best to assist their students, especially ones with lower abilities. w
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students
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think
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languages
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pupils&
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children may find it difficult to understanding
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different
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languages
, memorizing
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new
worlds or even suffer from diseases related to hearing and speaking, it is by no means
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clear
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allowed
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learning
foreign
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languages
as it will
immensely
affect their job career prospects and their futures as a whole.
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students
by motivating them and
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make
their progresses more
easily
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seen
with an effective teaching style.
For instance
, at the school where I studied, all the English teachers incorporated
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many
teaching methods into their lessons such as including quizzes and games and have their
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students
record their daily achievements, which made the lessons
considerably
more compelling and
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helped
the pupils to progressed well.

Additionally
, with the rapid development of technology, the process of
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learning
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new
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languages
can
thankfully
be
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more easier
as the
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students
can solve most of their problems through browsing the internet.
However
,
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some
internet sources can be may be unreliable or even misleading and it is the role of teachers and parents
generally
to ensure that the
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use
of the internet remains a guided
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learning
process.

To conclude
,
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i
feel that
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learning
foreign
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languages
, with their wide
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uses
in the economy, should remain an integral part of the curriculum for all
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students
and that teachers
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must
do their best to assist their
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students
,
especially
ones with lower abilities.
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10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
A new language is a new life.
Persian Proverb

IELTS essay Some believe that those who are not talented in language learning should not be required to learn a foreign language. Do you think school should require students to learn a foreign language? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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