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Some believe that spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Some believe that spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. v. 3
Some individuals opine that written communication is less vital than oral conversation. I disagree with the above notion and my supporting arguments are discussed further. Analysing both the inabilities, the two ways of communication are essential to transfer the information. On the other hand, spoken conversation is necessary in a few places. It is versatile that while speaking the other member can identify their emotions and even through facial expressions. For instance, an interview is conducted face to face round so that to understand the candidate's capacity and their feelings. Thus, spoken communication is essential for certain things, but it is not suitable for unpleasant messages. On the flip side, written form of communication is necessary to those who feel shy and lack of ability to convey the messages appropriately. Some masses cannot express their views orally, but their words speak about them. For example, a writer who pen down their ideas, shakes the world by expressing their thoughts. However, it is told that the pen is mightier than the sword. Eventually, written transmission is also suited to limited action of the society. To summarize, both ways of communication effectiveness depend on the situation or context, as different situations have different way to solve it. Hence, it is hard to say spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.
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Some
individuals opine that
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written
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
is less vital than oral conversation. I disagree with the above notion and my supporting arguments
are discussed
further
.

Possible spelling mistake. 'Analysing' is British English.
Analysing
both the inabilities, the two ways of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
are essential to transfer the information.
On the other hand
, spoken conversation is necessary in a few places. It is versatile that while speaking the other member can identify their emotions and even through facial expressions.
For instance
, an interview
is conducted
face to face round
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so
that to understand the candidate's capacity and their feelings.
Thus
, spoken
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communication
is essential for certain things,
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but
it is not suitable for unpleasant messages.

On the flip side,
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written
form of
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communication
is necessary to those who feel shy and lack of ability to convey the messages
appropriately
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
masses cannot express their views
orally
,
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but
their words speak about them.
For example
, a writer who pen down their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
, shakes the world by expressing their thoughts.
However
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
that the pen is mightier than the sword.
Eventually
,
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written
transmission is
also
suited to limited action of the society.

To summarize
, both ways of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
effectiveness depend on the situation or context, as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
situations have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
way to solve it.
Hence
, it is
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hard
to say spoken
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
is more powerful than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
written
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Some believe that spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
219 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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