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Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.4

Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders, while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views, and give your own business. The issue of whether management can be a skill or a natural personality has grown in importance over the past few decades. While there are persuasive arguments in favor of the fact that an individual has a talent of leaders naturally when they are born, I would believe that social members should be taught leadership skills in order to ameliorate their work and daily lives. On the one hand, a number of commentators justifiably argue that leadership skills are able to be developed in a wide range of ways in humans. From their point of view, it is obvious that these days, there is a major of study called management or MBA that helps students improve their proficiency in managing their own business or even their personal lives. Therefore, these courses have a positive influence on improving leadership skills. In order to manage a consultation enterprise associated with the inspection of pipelines, the manager is required to have strong credentials as well as MBA certificates. On the other hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that people are naturally born as leaders. They insist that there are some entrepreneurs who have thrived in their careers, which is attributed to having strong leadership skills that they achieve spontaneously from an early age without taking part in related courses. However, I do not find this argument convincing as they are far more likely to learn how to manage a company by reading business books, watching clips, and other ways. In my personal opinion, although some believe leadership skills are a natural characteristic from birth time, I mentioned that in no way are not leadership skills a natural personality. Human is actually capable of ameliorating the skills by getting involved in management courses in various universities and colleges.
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believe that
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people
are
naturally
born as leaders, while others feel that
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leadership
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
can develop.

Discuss both views, and give your
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own
business.

The issue of whether management can be a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skill
or a natural personality has grown in importance over the past few decades. While there are persuasive arguments in favor of the fact that an individual has a talent of leaders
naturally
when they
are born
, I would believe that social members should
be taught
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leadership
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
in order to ameliorate their work and daily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
.

On the one hand, a number of commentators
justifiably
argue that
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leadership
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
are able to
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be developed
in a wide range of ways in humans. From their point of view, it is obvious that these days, there is a major of study called management or MBA that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their proficiency in managing their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
business or even their personal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
.
Therefore
, these courses have a
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positive
influence on improving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leadership
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
. In order to manage a consultation enterprise associated with the inspection of pipelines, the manager
is required
to have strong credentials
as well
as MBA certificates.

On the other hand
, there are those who subscribe to the view that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are
naturally
born as leaders. They insist that there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
entrepreneurs who have thrived in their careers, which
is attributed
to having strong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leadership
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
that they achieve
spontaneously
from an early age without taking part in related courses.
However
, I do not find this argument convincing as they are far more likely to learn how to manage a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
by reading business books, watching clips, and other ways.

In my personal opinion, although
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
believe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leadership
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
are a natural characteristic from birth time, I mentioned that in no way are not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leadership
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
a natural personality. Human is actually capable of ameliorating the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
by getting involved in management courses in various universities and colleges.
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IELTS essay Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders, while others feel that leadership skills can develop.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
322 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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