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Solarsolar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v.2

Solarsolar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 2
solar power as a source of domestic household energy is becoming more desirable because many people and government are concerned that burning fossil fuels and carbon to the atmosphere and thus accelerates global warming and climate change. Others feel that nuclear power is potentially unsafe, and do not like its associated pollution from radioactive waste. Therefore, many researchers and consumers have a look at alternative source of energy and have found that solar power has many benefits and few drawbacks. The main advantage of solar energy is that after the first installation, it is entirely free and renewable, and there are no extra cost involved in producing the energy. Solar energy is silent and environmentally friendly as well it does not destroy or poison the ecosystem. This is because the raw material, sunshine does not need to be extracted or refined, so there are no pollutants for toxic residue produced. Another major advantage is that it is produced where it is needed so there is no energy wasted on and maintenance of the new technology for solar panels, which are so becoming less expensive, more available and much more efficient. The greatest drawback of solar power is that it is totally reliant on sunlight, which is not always constant. In fact, there are some regions where it may not be practical, as it does not work at night. Power from daytime sunshine must be stored in large batteries. In addition, the panels tend to be big and cumbersome. A major drawback for some is that the first purchase and installation of the equipment is costly. In my view, the benefits of a clean, quite, renewable, eco-friendly source of energy far outweigh the drawbacks, provided that there is enough sunlight available to make this source of power possible.
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solar
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as a
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source
of domestic household
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energy
is becoming more desirable
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many
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people
and
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government
are concerned
that burning fossil fuels and carbon to the atmosphere and
thus
accelerates global warming and climate
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change
. Others feel that nuclear
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power
is
potentially
unsafe, and do not like its associated pollution from radioactive waste.
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researchers and consumers have a look at alternative
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source
of
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energy
and have found that
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solar
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power
has
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many
benefits and few drawbacks.

The main advantage of
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solar
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energy
is that after the
first
installation, it is
entirely
free and renewable, and there are no extra cost involved in producing the
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energy
.
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Solar
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energy
is silent and
environmentally
friendly
as well
it does not
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destroy
or poison the ecosystem. This is
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because
the raw material, sunshine does not need to
be extracted
or refined,
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so
there are no pollutants for toxic residue produced.

Another major advantage is that it
is produced
where it
is needed
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so
there is no
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energy
wasted on and maintenance of the new technology for
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solar
panels, which are
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so
becoming less expensive, more available and much more efficient.

The greatest drawback of
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solar
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power
is that it is
totally
reliant on sunlight, which is not always constant. In fact, there are
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some
regions where it may not be practical, as it does not work at night.
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Power
from daytime sunshine
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must
be stored
in large batteries.
In addition
, the panels tend to be
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big
and cumbersome. A major drawback for
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some
is that the
first
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purchase
and installation of the equipment is costly.

In my view, the benefits of a clean, quite, renewable, eco-friendly
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source
of
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energy
far outweigh the drawbacks, provided that there is
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enough
sunlight available to
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make
this
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source
of
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power
possible.
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23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Solarsolar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 2

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5 paragraphs
297 words
6.0
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