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solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v.2

solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 2
It is argued that solar power is gaining popularity as a means of a power source in the residential houses and buildings in certain nations around the globe. This is due to the fact that people nowadays have become aware of the dangers of overconsumption of fossil fuels. Although, there are some benefits such as it is a one-time investment and has a low maintenance cost, there are certain drawbacks such as the huge amount of cost to install solar systems in the houses. The primary argument to increase the inclination towards the usage of solar energy is that people have become aware of the dangers of an over usage of non-renewable resources. This is to say that the overconsumption of fossil fuels raises the amount of Co2 emission in the environment. Consequently, the temperature has raised because of that there have been numerous amounts of problems born. A typical reference for this is that because of global warming, Japan is drowning 1% every year, according to a survey conducted by the UN. As a result, the future of human beings might become in danger. The major benefit of using solar energy is that it requires only a single time investment. By this I mean to say that there is no other cost to use solar energy once the installation has been done. It provides enough power to run all the appliances in the houses and buildings for a long period of time. For example, according to a survey organized by MIIT, around 80% of Israelis are using solar energy as a means of a power source in their residential and commercial places instead of the other energy resources. On the other side, the strongest drawback of solar energy is that the high principal cost to bring in the whole system at a particular place. This is because financially weak people cannot afford that much amount of the investment because they have comparatively low income. This is the reason that some poor countries do not use solar energy to produce electricity because there are less chances of acceptance. For example, most of the states in Africa have perfect conditions to set the solar system, but the poor financial condition of some countries could not make it possible to implement it, according to an article in the Times of India newspaper. In conclusion, the electricity produced from solar energy is becoming famous in the citizens of many countries around the planet because people have got awareness about the dangers of the overconsumption of fossil fuels. Although it requires only one-time investment and low maintenance cost, the major disadvantage of solar energy is the large initial cost to apply a system at houses and buildings.
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that
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solar
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power
is gaining popularity as a means of a
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power
source in the residential
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houses
and buildings in certain nations around the globe.
This is due to the fact that
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people
nowadays have become aware of the
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dangers
of overconsumption of fossil fuels. Although, there are
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some
benefits such as it is a one-time
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investment
and has a low maintenance
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cost
, there are certain drawbacks such as the huge
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amount
of
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cost
to install
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solar
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systems
in the
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houses
.

The primary argument to increase the inclination towards the usage of
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solar
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energy
is that
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people
have become aware of the
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dangers
of an over usage of non-renewable resources. This is to say that the overconsumption of fossil fuels raises the
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amount
of Co2 emission in the environment.
Consequently
, the temperature has raised
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because
of that there have been numerous
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amounts
of problems born. A typical reference for this is that
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because
of global warming, Japan is drowning 1% every year, according to a survey conducted by the UN.
As a result
, the future of human beings might become in
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danger
.

The major benefit of using
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solar
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energy
is that it requires
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only
a single time
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investment
. By this I mean to say that there is no other
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cost
to
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use
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solar
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energy
once the installation has
been done
. It provides
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enough
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power
to run all the appliances in the
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houses
and buildings for a long period of time.
For example
, according to a survey organized by
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MIIT
, around 80% of Israelis are using
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solar
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energy
as a means of a
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power
source in their residential and commercial places
instead
of the other
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energy
resources. On the other side, the strongest drawback of
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solar
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energy
is that the high principal
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cost
to bring in the whole
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system
at a particular place. This is
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because
financially
weak
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people
cannot afford that much
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amount
of the
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investment
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because
they have
comparatively
low income. This is the reason that
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some
poor countries do not
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use
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solar
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energy
to produce electricity
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because
there are
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less
chances of acceptance.
For example
, most of the states in Africa have perfect conditions to set the
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solar
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system
,
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but
the poor financial condition of
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some
countries could not
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make
it possible to implement it, according to an article in
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the Times of India
newspaper.

In conclusion
, the electricity produced from
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solar
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energy
is becoming
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famous
in the citizens of
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many
countries around the planet
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because
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people
have
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got
awareness about the
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dangers
of the overconsumption of fossil fuels. Although it requires
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only
one-time
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investment
and low maintenance
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cost
, the major disadvantage of
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solar
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energy
is the large initial
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cost
to apply a
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system
at
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houses
and buildings.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
453 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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