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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of solar energy v.22

Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of solar energy v. 22
Nowadays, Learner enjoys their journey to learn oversea. Learning and taking place in a new area is an advantageous activity to try. In my mind, it is a really good thing to learn and take place in another country. Firstly, Learning or living abroad can give you new experiences about new cultures, a new climate, and also to experience a new kind of food. When you arrive in a foreign Outland, you will meet new culture that different from yours, so you can learn from them, you definitely feel differently about temperature, and foodstuff. For examples, when you are Asian, you have experienced hot temperature, and your main food is rice, but when you go to another place of the world, like Europe, you will experience new cold temperature, and even their main meal is not rice, instead their meal is bread, cheese, or something that is so different from yours, so you can try all those new things. Moreover, Students who go abroad, they will feel homesick. When you take a trip to an Outland far away from your family and friends, it will make you feel lonely, even thought, you will meet new friends, but you still think about your family and friends, who gave you support and closed to you, it feels homesick for you, and make you feel concerned. This is demonstrated, when students are with their families and their buddies, they got careless, and cheer up from them, and when you go far away, you will get less care from the peoples around you in the whole new land, by the way, you have to face your own problems with no much help like you used to get. In conclusion, Learning and living abroad will give new experiences, and also can make you feel homesick. It is a good thing for students to start their journey in a brand new country, to get more experiences.
Nowadays, Learner enjoys their journey to learn oversea. Learning and taking place in a
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area is an advantageous activity to try. In my mind, it is a
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good
thing to learn and take place in another country.

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new
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experiences
about
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cultures, a
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new
climate, and
also
to
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experience
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new
kind of food. When you arrive in a foreign
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, you will
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culture that
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you can learn from them, you definitely
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feel
differently
about temperature, and foodstuff. For examples, when you are Asian, you have experienced hot temperature, and your main food is rice,
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but
when you go to another place of the world, like Europe, you will
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experience
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new
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cold
temperature, and even their main meal is not rice,
instead
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that is
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so
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different
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Moreover
, Students who go abroad, they will
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homesick. When you take a trip to an
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far away from your family and friends, it will
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you
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feel
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good
thing for students to
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more
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7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of solar energy v. 22

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
320 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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