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Smart phones are being used in classrooms more than ever before. Some people think that this aids the learning process, while other think it hinders it. Discuss both these views and give your Own Opinion. v.1

Smart phones are being used in classrooms more than ever before. Some people think that this aids the learning process, while other think it hinders it. v. 1
The use of smart electronic devices such as iPhone, iPad and Android in education has increased a lot than before. Some say this helps the learning, whereas others think it does not. Although smart phones in the classroom reduces interpersonal communication skill and increases typo mistakes, I believe it is essential to incorporate latest technology in the study room because of the modern interactive learning. On the one hand, using too much word processing software makes student spelling mistakes and it decreases the student-teacher communications. Modern days software has ultra intelligence to auto correct the mistakes and frequently using it will reduce the ability to write on a paper. In addition, participating in a debate in the class creates a natural bonding between classmates and instructors, while following a lecture on the iPad or Android gadgets does not create such environment. However, it is nice to have personal interactions, but the Internet makes learning easy and interesting. On the other hand, the web and smart gadgets make study creative and interactive. Graphical presentation makes any topic more understanding and pupils can view them multiple times in their own space. For example, most of the school and colleges in the United States have free Internet to browse institute's portals where they can upload their assignments and download lectures. Not only that, some universities have launched a distance education program where anyone can join in the class from anywhere in the world. I believe, technology has aided the lecture room with a variety of resources which were not available in the past traditional system. In conclusion, on the rise of modern technology the smart devices are being used more frequently in the lecture room than before. Despite some negative impacts one education system, it makes the classroom more interesting and students can join freely from any country.
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and increases typo mistakes, I believe it is essential to incorporate latest technology in the study room
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of the modern interactive learning.

On the one hand, using too much word processing software
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makes
student spelling mistakes and it decreases the student-teacher communications. Modern days software has ultra intelligence to
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auto correct
the mistakes and
frequently
using it will
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reduce
the ability to write on a paper.
In addition
, participating in a debate in the
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class
creates a natural bonding between classmates and instructors, while following a
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lecture
on the iPad or Android gadgets does not create such environment.
However
, it is nice to have personal interactions,
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but
the Internet
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makes
learning easy and interesting.

On the other hand
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smart
gadgets
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make
study creative and interactive. Graphical presentation
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makes
any topic more understanding and pupils can view them multiple times in their
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space.
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, most of the school and colleges in the United States have free Internet to browse institute's portals where they can upload their assignments and download
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lectures
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universities have launched a distance education program where anyone can
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join
in the
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class
from anywhere in the world. I believe, technology has aided the
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lecture
room with a variety of resources which were not available in the past traditional system.

In conclusion
, on the rise of modern technology the
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smart
devices are being
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used
more
frequently
in the
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before
. Despite
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some
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impacts one education system, it
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makes
the classroom more interesting and students can
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join
freely
from any country.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Smart phones are being used in classrooms more than ever before. Some people think that this aids the learning process, while other think it hinders it. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
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