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smacking children is the best form of discipline. to what extent do you agree or disagree? v.17

smacking children is the best form of discipline. v. 17
There are various ways of instilling discipline in kids, one of which is using the rod. Some people believe that the physical form of punishment is the best way to discipline children. This essay will argue why smacking children is not the best form of punishment. Many parents are of the opinion that smacking children produce faster results. This is understandable because corporal punishment, like caning or flogging brings about a remorse feeling in their wards, due to the pain inflicted on them. For example, most guardians argue that children hardly forget the pain inflicted as a result of physical punishment; therefore, the likelihood of them repeating an offence is low. Some parents believe that the non-usage of the rod can result to a problematic upbringing later in the future, based on the saying, “spare the rod and spoil the child”. Due to these reasons, some adults prefer physical method of discipline to other methods. While I understand that children are quite difficult to handle; I completely disagree with the idea that causing kids' pain is the best form of discipline. First, caning youngsters without letting them know how they have erred leads to futility. Continuous flogging of kids may lead to psychological trauma. For instance, it has been shown that youngsters who experienced the physical form of discipline abuse their partners physically and otherwise in marriage. In conclusion, this essay argued that physical form of punishment is not the way to correct the kids. Consequently, I completely disagree with the use of rod to correct children
There are various ways of instilling
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discipline
in kids, one of which is using the
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rod
.
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Some
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people
believe that the
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physical
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form
of
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punishment
is the best way to
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discipline
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children
. This essay will argue why smacking
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children
is not the best
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form
of punishment.

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Many
parents are of the opinion that smacking
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children
produce faster results. This is understandable
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because
corporal
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punishment
, like caning or flogging brings about a remorse feeling in their wards, due to the pain inflicted on them.
For example
, most guardians argue that
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children
hardly forget the pain inflicted
as a result
of
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physical
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punishment
;
therefore
, the likelihood of them repeating an
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offence
is low.
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Some
parents believe that the non-usage of the
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rod
can result to a problematic upbringing later in the future, based on the saying, “spare the
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rod
and spoil the child”. Due to these reasons,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
adults prefer
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physical
method of
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discipline
to other methods.

While I understand that
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children
are quite difficult to handle; I completely disagree with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that causing kids' pain is the best
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form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
discipline
.
First
, caning youngsters without letting them know how they have erred leads to futility. Continuous flogging of kids may lead to psychological trauma.
For instance
, it has
been shown
that youngsters who experienced the
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physical
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form
of
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discipline
abuse their partners
physically
and
otherwise
in marriage.

In conclusion
, this essay argued that
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physical
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form
of
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punishment
is not the way to correct the kids.
Consequently
, I completely disagree with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
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rod
to correct
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children
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay smacking children is the best form of discipline. v. 17

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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