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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree v.11

Smacking children is the best form of discipline. v. 11
Nowadays, it is believed by many parents that smacking is a best way to control their children’s behaviour. This essay will outline the facts to believe that this is an inappropriate approach Smacking is one of the easiest method to threaten the child to make discipline and obey their orders. Furthermore, parents have the reason to believe that this is the fastest way to take control of the situation, for instance if a child speaks bad words in a public place it is best to smack immediately to stop the child to teach him lesson to avoid it in future. Owing to the fact it is normal for the parents to choose this method for faster solution. Although, some parents believed that physical punishment is an easiest way, but they fail to understand the adverse effect in the long term. Physically threatened children will lack self-confidence and aggressive in nature. This will add insult to the injury and may lead to affect their personality and social skills. For example, in a recent study conducted by Madras University about parenting skills revealed that students scored A+ in their grades are guided through better examples rather than physical punishment by their parents. hence it is not an acceptable behaviour to smack the children To Conclude, it is not always essential to smack the children for their bad behaviour, but it is imperative to teach the consequences of bad manners and lead by example to build better character for their better and brighter future. I strongly agree that guiding through principles and moral stories is essential to bring disciplined children for the future world
Nowadays, it
is believed
by
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many
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parents
that smacking is
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a
best way to control their
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children’s
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behaviour
. This essay will outline the facts to believe that this is an inappropriate approach

Smacking is one of the easiest method to threaten the child to
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make
discipline and obey their orders.
Furthermore
,
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parents
have the reason to believe that this is the fastest way to take control of the situation,
for instance
if a child speaks
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bad
words in a public place it is best to smack immediately to
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stop
the child to teach him lesson to avoid it
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in future
. Owing to the fact it is normal for the
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parents
to choose this method for faster solution.

Although,
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some
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parents
believed that physical punishment is
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an
easiest way,
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but
they fail to understand the adverse effect in the long term.
Physically
threatened
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children
will lack self-confidence and aggressive in nature. This will
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add
insult to the injury and may lead to affect their personality and social
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skills
.
For example
, in a recent study conducted by Madras University about parenting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
revealed that students scored A+ in their grades
are guided
through better examples
rather
than physical punishment by their
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parents
.
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hence
it is not an acceptable
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behaviour
to smack the children

To Conclude
, it is not always essential to smack the
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children
for their
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bad
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behaviour
,
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but
it is imperative to teach the consequences of
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bad
manners and lead by example to build better character for their better and brighter future. I
strongly
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agree
that guiding through principles and moral stories is essential to bring disciplined
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children
for the future
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world
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IELTS essay Smacking children is the best form of discipline. v. 11

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
270 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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