I think that wealthy nations should share their
prosperous resources with the poorly nations to
improve their living by offering food and education.
Reasons to share their wealth are:
• To Build up humanity
• To Improve friendship in neighbouring countries
• To save the lives of people
Whenever famine hits the country, it wipes out all
their crops and let the people suffer from starvation.
One such example is Somalia where people died like
flies under starvation. It is the duty of other nations
to support their cause by providing food in their need.
Thus it keeps the humanity alive and pass on to the
next generation. It inspires others to be humane.
In case of undeveloped countries, it is not easy to
provide quality education to youngsters by their
government. Thus the developed nations should lend
them the way for their studies. Since youth is the
backbone of their land, it is inevitable for them to
acquire proper graduation. This builds up healthy
relationship between provinces as they are benefited
by their nearest countries.
Sharing should not be stopped with food and education
alone. It includes saving the lives of people when the
nearby country faces the natural calamities. In those
situations, it is important to send their troops to the
affected territory in order to reduce the casualties.
The required medical support should be dispatched to
treat the wounded people.
I conclude that sharing to the needy people is the
best way to spend the money as it replinish the dying
humanity and creates the bonding between countries.
I
think
that wealthy nations should share their
prosperous resources with the
poorly
nations to
improve
their living by offering food and education.
Reasons to share their wealth are:
• To Build up humanity
• To
Improve
friendship in
neighbouring
countries
•
To save the
lives
of
people
Whenever famine hits the
country
, it wipes out all
their
crops and
let
the
people
suffer from starvation.
One such example is Somalia where
people
died
like
flies
under starvation. It is the duty of other
nations
to
support their cause by providing food in their need.
Thus
it
keeps
the humanity alive and pass on to the
next
generation. It inspires others to be humane.
In case of undeveloped
countries
, it is not easy to
provide quality education to youngsters by their
government
.
Thus
the developed nations should
lend
them
the way for their studies. Since youth is
the
backbone of their land, it is inevitable for them to
acquire
proper graduation. This builds up
healthy
relationship between provinces as they
are benefited
by
their nearest countries.
Sharing should not be
stopped
with food and education
alone
. It includes saving the
lives
of
people
when
the
nearby
country
faces the natural calamities. In
those
situations, it is
important
to
send
their troops to the
affected
territory in order to
reduce
the casualties.
The required medical support should
be dispatched
to
treat
the wounded
people
.
I conclude that sharing to the needy
people
is
the
best
way to spend the money as it
replinish
the dying
humanity
and creates the bonding between
countries
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Mistakes